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oh, no the weight she bear is not that of the entire world but that of her own everyone carries the weight of their world on their shoulders well most we can share our weight with others but both have to wish for it or the weight of one's burden may crush the other if one can see the weight of another beginning to crush them they will not worsen their burden by dumping their own on top her surroundings are so fragile everyone around her could be pulverised by just one more pound so she keeps it to herself shuts her mouth puts her sorrows deep inside inside the safe under lock and key so that no one ever has to bear her weight
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Apr 16, 2014
Apr 16, 2014 at 5:01 PM UTC
Weight, part II
oh, no the weight she bear is not that of the entire world but that of her own everyone carries the weight of their world on their shoulders well most we can share our weight with others but both have to wish for it or the weight of one's burden may crush the other if one can see the weight of another beginning to crush them they will not worsen their burden by dumping their own on top her surroundings are so fragile everyone around her could be pulverised by just one more pound so she keeps it to herself shuts her mouth puts her sorrows deep inside inside the safe under lock and key so that no one ever has to bear her weight
thoughts-with-anna
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Apr 16, 2014
Apr 16, 2014 at 5:01 PM UTC
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