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I sit on the train with my eyes fixed at the blur of lights outside the window as the train rushes by. And in this moment, this moment where light and motion and visions of you mix into a swirl of a perfect blend that I start seeing your reflection, your eyes looking back into mine. And I am awaken by the sudden stop in the station with the fact that the seat beside me is still empty. But soon I am counting down days your hand will be holding mine... As we coast from north to south without purpose back and forth, people watching sitting on this train wasting away seconds, minutes and hours. For every moment spent just merely beside you is worth all the while. I love you, Anne. Yours and only yours, Mims
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Mar 19, 2014
Mar 19, 2014 at 8:58 AM UTC
Train Ride 03/18/2014
I sit on the train with my eyes fixed at the blur of lights outside the window as the train rushes by. And in this moment, this moment where light and motion and visions of you mix into a swirl of a perfect blend that I start seeing your reflection, your eyes looking back into mine. And I am awaken by the sudden stop in the station with the fact that the seat beside me is still empty. But soon I am counting down days your hand will be holding mine... As we coast from north to south without purpose back and forth, people watching sitting on this train wasting away seconds, minutes and hours. For every moment spent just merely beside you is worth all the while. I love you, Anne. Yours and only yours, Mims
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Mar 19, 2014
Mar 19, 2014 at 8:58 AM UTC
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