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We shot the movie in chrome-based Black and White Thinking we were '80's hipsters with a sharp postmodern overbite And three days later we were cracking up in the editing room over a three-way monologue on horrible lighting in midday TV living rooms Well that was July and now August is ******* us off My fashionably long hair is turning mulleted and I've picked up an off-season cough And now you're somewhere in Brooklyn trying to catch a break Your hair's been cut into a schoolboy's bob and your new friends all look like fakes I'd never thought it'd be you when I'm staring at a screen it's funny how later in life we focus on what we once thought were inbetweens Our old friend is working like a robot trying to make the weekend fit I guess he supposes it's better to be lit up just for christmas than for the constant party graveyard shift And I guess I'm supposed to believe you when you tell me "it's all still pretty fun" eating beans for breakfast and supper and spending Saturday nights on your own But maybe I'm just jealous there's probably a lot of truth in that I suppose i'm just getting nostalgic for the days when I was the only boy who could make you laugh The three of us never cut it off too severely so I'm banking on that long weekend were we'll meet up in some ex-undergrad hangout and pretend we're all still best friends "If we were born five years earlier" Remember, I used to tell you "We all won't be so cursed I guess you were right in saying, "our lives are going to take on the plot of Metropolis, but in reverse"
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Mar 17, 2014
Mar 17, 2014 at 8:50 AM UTC
Metropolis, in Reverse
We shot the movie in chrome-based Black and White Thinking we were '80's hipsters with a sharp postmodern overbite And three days later we were cracking up in the editing room over a three-way monologue on horrible lighting in midday TV living rooms Well that was July and now August is ******* us off My fashionably long hair is turning mulleted and I've picked up an off-season cough And now you're somewhere in Brooklyn trying to catch a break Your hair's been cut into a schoolboy's bob and your new friends all look like fakes I'd never thought it'd be you when I'm staring at a screen it's funny how later in life we focus on what we once thought were inbetweens Our old friend is working like a robot trying to make the weekend fit I guess he supposes it's better to be lit up just for christmas than for the constant party graveyard shift And I guess I'm supposed to believe you when you tell me "it's all still pretty fun" eating beans for breakfast and supper and spending Saturday nights on your own But maybe I'm just jealous there's probably a lot of truth in that I suppose i'm just getting nostalgic for the days when I was the only boy who could make you laugh The three of us never cut it off too severely so I'm banking on that long weekend were we'll meet up in some ex-undergrad hangout and pretend we're all still best friends "If we were born five years earlier" Remember, I used to tell you "We all won't be so cursed I guess you were right in saying, "our lives are going to take on the plot of Metropolis, but in reverse"
Some song lyrics I've been toying around with. "Metroplis" is a 1922 German silent film directed by Fritz Lang (1890-1976) about a futuristic dystopian society, that after much ado, transforms into a socially Utopian model of fraternity.
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Mar 17, 2014
Mar 17, 2014 at 8:50 AM UTC
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