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From afar I stand structurally sound, No large gashes or permanent pinkish slashes, But wind your way closer and peel back your eyes The rust begins to show, Climb inside I'm slowly eroding, And collapsing. Most feel it's better to partially admire From behind a series of cement structures Only glimpsing at my strength and stability.
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Jan 27, 2014
Jan 27, 2014 at 9:18 AM UTC
"I'm fine"
From afar I stand structurally sound, No large gashes or permanent pinkish slashes, But wind your way closer and peel back your eyes The rust begins to show, Climb inside I'm slowly eroding, And collapsing. Most feel it's better to partially admire From behind a series of cement structures Only glimpsing at my strength and stability.
So tired, so done
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Jan 27, 2014
Jan 27, 2014 at 9:18 AM UTC
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