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Peace felt strange on her skin Like a sweater too soft for somebody raised in the winter She was a hot girl Yet this man treated her so gently He was nice genuinely He was always on time, called when he said he would, Gave step daddy energy to her three kids, Opened her door And completed tasks without being asked He was safe and mundane Predictable, to her everyday felt the same with him After a while she genuinely thought something was actually wrong with him Every compliment he gave made her suspicious. Every safe night he provided made her feel the opposite "He's a really nice guy" Which is why she was having such a hard time Figuring out why the two of them didn’t align Then like a wieght being lifted from her mind she realized Though gentle this man didn't give her an emotional high On the surface she thought she was ready But the consequence of having a nice man got to be too heavy Caught up ruminating in her own head She did what any insecure woman would've did She ran from that nice man Back into the arms of a man she was comfortable with A man she could relate in brokenness with A man she had one of her three kids with Despite the things that nice man did Peace felt less familiar than suffering did And being with this nice man shed light on parts of herself she always hid
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May 11
May 11, 2026 at 7:00 PM UTC
The Consequence of Having a Nice Man
Peace felt strange on her skin Like a sweater too soft for somebody raised in the winter She was a hot girl Yet this man treated her so gently He was nice genuinely He was always on time, called when he said he would, Gave step daddy energy to her three kids, Opened her door And completed tasks without being asked He was safe and mundane Predictable, to her everyday felt the same with him After a while she genuinely thought something was actually wrong with him Every compliment he gave made her suspicious. Every safe night he provided made her feel the opposite "He's a really nice guy" Which is why she was having such a hard time Figuring out why the two of them didn’t align Then like a wieght being lifted from her mind she realized Though gentle this man didn't give her an emotional high On the surface she thought she was ready But the consequence of having a nice man got to be too heavy Caught up ruminating in her own head She did what any insecure woman would've did She ran from that nice man Back into the arms of a man she was comfortable with A man she could relate in brokenness with A man she had one of her three kids with Despite the things that nice man did Peace felt less familiar than suffering did And being with this nice man shed light on parts of herself she always hid
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May 11
May 11, 2026 at 7:00 PM UTC
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