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Rewriting Memory There comes a time when we cross a certain threshold Like reaching higher ground and seeing the road behind It’s as if the map we held had several detours Some were needless while trying to find peace of mind And maybe those diversions were necessary Sometimes guidance and advice will fall on deaf ears But we live and we learn, with bumps, bruises and burns Recalling how we would’ve saved ourselves some tears But that’s OK, we appreciate the lesson We value the time and effort it takes to grow A second draft of us becomes like a rebirth Refining and revising when it’s time to glow I can see the road ahead and it’s quite the climb With a quiet mind I try not to be so callous All for the memories that now stay behind Now I’m still trying, striving, searching for balance
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Apr 29
Apr 29, 2026 at 9:24 PM UTC
A Second Draft Of Us
Rewriting Memory There comes a time when we cross a certain threshold Like reaching higher ground and seeing the road behind It’s as if the map we held had several detours Some were needless while trying to find peace of mind And maybe those diversions were necessary Sometimes guidance and advice will fall on deaf ears But we live and we learn, with bumps, bruises and burns Recalling how we would’ve saved ourselves some tears But that’s OK, we appreciate the lesson We value the time and effort it takes to grow A second draft of us becomes like a rebirth Refining and revising when it’s time to glow I can see the road ahead and it’s quite the climb With a quiet mind I try not to be so callous All for the memories that now stay behind Now I’m still trying, striving, searching for balance
NaPoWriMo2026 Day 29
Wallyroo92
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51/M/United States
Apr 29
Apr 29, 2026 at 9:24 PM UTC
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