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The craziest thing happened to me; I had a strange encounter with a bumblebee. My husband was cutting the neighbors lawn, As I sat on our back patio with the radio on. I was soaking in the beautiful spring day, The bee landed on me and was there to stay. As it stood on the top of my left hand, I froze: I wasnt sure how i was going to oppose... I gently shook my arm hoping it would fly off, But No, it stuck around, refusing to takeoff There were many thoughts now in my head; One option was to flick it off my hand instead. Then I thought: bad idea, it will sting you At this point, I didnt know what else to do. So I softly shook my hand again, to no avail- This bumblebee was not going to bail! Then I heard my husband say, "honey"? I quickly responded, "yeah"? "Would you grab the **** whacker over the fence"? He asked I responded, "hold on, a bee landed on me". "What?" he asked, unsure of what i just said. I slowly, stood up and approached the fence, As I lifted up my hand, I became very tense. The bee was content to ride along as i walked I had been completly and utterly shocked. The bumblebee remained perfectly in place- Which I was forced to simply embrace. As my husband handed the **** eater over I showed him the bee on me and was the prover My husband asked, "will you open the gate for me" My answer, " the bee and I will meet you out front". Just then— the bee flew away.
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Apr 23
Apr 23, 2026 at 10:59 PM UTC
Bumblebee Encounter
The craziest thing happened to me; I had a strange encounter with a bumblebee. My husband was cutting the neighbors lawn, As I sat on our back patio with the radio on. I was soaking in the beautiful spring day, The bee landed on me and was there to stay. As it stood on the top of my left hand, I froze: I wasnt sure how i was going to oppose... I gently shook my arm hoping it would fly off, But No, it stuck around, refusing to takeoff There were many thoughts now in my head; One option was to flick it off my hand instead. Then I thought: bad idea, it will sting you At this point, I didnt know what else to do. So I softly shook my hand again, to no avail- This bumblebee was not going to bail! Then I heard my husband say, "honey"? I quickly responded, "yeah"? "Would you grab the **** whacker over the fence"? He asked I responded, "hold on, a bee landed on me". "What?" he asked, unsure of what i just said. I slowly, stood up and approached the fence, As I lifted up my hand, I became very tense. The bee was content to ride along as i walked I had been completly and utterly shocked. The bumblebee remained perfectly in place- Which I was forced to simply embrace. As my husband handed the **** eater over I showed him the bee on me and was the prover My husband asked, "will you open the gate for me" My answer, " the bee and I will meet you out front". Just then— the bee flew away.
A poetry exercise - write a poem about a recent incident as if you were telling a story to a room full of people, icoeporate a conversational tone and dialog
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Apr 23
Apr 23, 2026 at 10:59 PM UTC
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