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I look up at you with beseeching eyes, Like an idiot. I ask endless questions, And beg for an explanation, Like a curious toddler. I wait to know what I could have done to experience reciprocated love And be eternally cared for, Like an abandoned puppy. No matter how hard I try to delineate, No matter what I equate myself to, you will never be able to fully comprehend Why my forgiveness is choked back unlike ever before.
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Apr 23
Apr 23, 2026 at 2:41 AM UTC
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I look up at you with beseeching eyes, Like an idiot. I ask endless questions, And beg for an explanation, Like a curious toddler. I wait to know what I could have done to experience reciprocated love And be eternally cared for, Like an abandoned puppy. No matter how hard I try to delineate, No matter what I equate myself to, you will never be able to fully comprehend Why my forgiveness is choked back unlike ever before.
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18/F/Cape town
Apr 23
Apr 23, 2026 at 2:41 AM UTC
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