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Eliot is a surname-turned-given name originating from Medieval England, primarily as a diminutive of the Hebrew name Elijah or Elias ("The Lord is my God") the silver and the armored plate, even the dross, all requires the minutiae's handiwork of hands that never cease to polish, for good works are oft dented indeed, indentured, by myriad and well intentioned small & tender ball bearing indentations for good works lay here, for all to give take and free to participate The Gates of Heaven are never meant to be grates, closed, be locked numerous disciples from years past are knock knocking asking for admittance to Fort Reentry asking why their door key, does not receive thy forbearance; and many works of great repute are now denied to their very own composers make haste, thy dams to repair, for sanctuary is such only to all, young & old when the doors held open by the teeming masses many come here for shelter, the freedom to dare to be artists articulate, not an inner room a Sanctum sanctorum* for the lucky few who came and stayed even though the “gateways” oft were in their face slammed shuttered the only rhyme to poetry, is a four letter key spelt and spilled: f r e e ————— fini ———- “It is enough; now, O Lord, take away my life, for I am no better than my ancestors" Elijah (1 Kings 19:4).** * (Latin for "holy of holies") refers to the innermost, most sacred, and private chamber of a temple or sanctuary. It is commonly used to describe a highly private room, a "retreat," or a place where only a few are allowed, such as a personal office or a revered, restricted space.
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Apr 12
Apr 12, 2026 at 12:41 AM UTC
Oh Eliot! who Commissions the Comissioners?
Eliot is a surname-turned-given name originating from Medieval England, primarily as a diminutive of the Hebrew name Elijah or Elias ("The Lord is my God") the silver and the armored plate, even the dross, all requires the minutiae's handiwork of hands that never cease to polish, for good works are oft dented indeed, indentured, by myriad and well intentioned small & tender ball bearing indentations for good works lay here, for all to give take and free to participate The Gates of Heaven are never meant to be grates, closed, be locked numerous disciples from years past are knock knocking asking for admittance to Fort Reentry asking why their door key, does not receive thy forbearance; and many works of great repute are now denied to their very own composers make haste, thy dams to repair, for sanctuary is such only to all, young & old when the doors held open by the teeming masses many come here for shelter, the freedom to dare to be artists articulate, not an inner room a Sanctum sanctorum* for the lucky few who came and stayed even though the “gateways” oft were in their face slammed shuttered the only rhyme to poetry, is a four letter key spelt and spilled: f r e e ————— fini ———- “It is enough; now, O Lord, take away my life, for I am no better than my ancestors" Elijah (1 Kings 19:4).** * (Latin for "holy of holies") refers to the innermost, most sacred, and private chamber of a temple or sanctuary. It is commonly used to describe a highly private room, a "retreat," or a place where only a few are allowed, such as a personal office or a revered, restricted space.
**the Prophet Elijah said in a moment of despair:… Elijah complains before God and goes on about the weariness of his life, the fatigue of the struggle, the temptation to make the final withdrawal. All that remains is to throw in the towel; everything has been useless. He has probably experienced that his prophetic ministry and his efforts to fight against Baalism and against the injustice of the system in Israel have proved to be of little value. ~~1:11am~~ Sun Apr 12 nyc
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Apr 12
Apr 12, 2026 at 12:41 AM UTC
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