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You don’t write the poems.... but you hold the sky they fall into. While others chase metaphors, you chase bugs.... silent, stubborn ghosts hiding between lines of code no one else reads. A glitch flickers.... and somewhere a poet thinks their voice has broken. You know better. You stay. You fix. You apologize for storms you didn’t summon. You built a place where strangers bleed safely, where words don’t ask permission before becoming wounds or wings. And still.... you answer messages, patch fractures, rewrite rules so kindness has a structure and silence has a home. Who thanks the one who keeps the door open while everyone else walks in and out carrying pieces of themselves? You are not in the poems.... but you are in every pause between them, every comment that lands gently, every voice that stays because nothing broke when it mattered. So here.... a rare thing for a builder: Not feedback. Not a bug report. Just this.... Thank you for holding a world together that was never yours alone.
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Apr 16
Apr 16, 2026 at 3:09 PM UTC
For the One Behind the Quiet Platform @eliotyork
3h ago Apr 13, 2026 at 4:23 AM EDT hey nat, we do not currently have a way to unblock users but we have added blocking/unblocking to our feature list. working on it! Just now Apr 13, 2026 at 8:01 AM EDT ok now about dinner? muy buy! p.s Pradip is now unblocked
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Apr 13
Apr 13, 2026 at 8:05 AM UTC
Eliot lives! (yay, sorta)
Eliot is a surname-turned-given name originating from Medieval England, primarily as a diminutive of the Hebrew name Elijah or Elias ("The Lord is my God") the silver and the armored plate, even the dross, all requires the minutiae's handiwork of hands that never cease to polish, for good works are oft dented indeed, indentured, by myriad and well intentioned small & tender ball bearing indentations for good works lay here, for all to give take and free to participate The Gates of Heaven are never meant to be grates, closed, be locked numerous disciples from years past are knock knocking asking for admittance to Fort Reentry asking why their door key, does not receive thy forbearance; and many works of great repute are now denied to their very own composers make haste, thy dams to repair, for sanctuary is such only to all, young & old when the doors held open by the teeming masses many come here for shelter, the freedom to dare to be artists articulate, not an inner room a Sanctum sanctorum* for the lucky few who came and stayed even though the “gateways” oft were in their face slammed shuttered the only rhyme to poetry, is a four letter key spelt and spilled: f r e e ————— fini ———- “It is enough; now, O Lord, take away my life, for I am no better than my ancestors" Elijah (1 Kings 19:4).** * (Latin for "holy of holies") refers to the innermost, most sacred, and private chamber of a temple or sanctuary. It is commonly used to describe a highly private room, a "retreat," or a place where only a few are allowed, such as a personal office or a revered, restricted space.
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Apr 12
Apr 12, 2026 at 12:41 AM UTC
Oh Eliot! who Commissions the Comissioners?
Eliot is a surname-turned-given name originating from Medieval England, primarily as a diminutive of the Hebrew name Elijah or Elias ("The Lord is my God") the silver and the armored plate, even the dross, all requires the minutiae's handiwork of hands that never cease to polish, for good works are oft dented indeed, indentured, by myriad and well intentioned small & tender ball bearing indentations for good works lay here, for all to give take and free to participate The Gates of Heaven are never meant to be grates, closed, be locked numerous disciples from years past are knock knocking asking for admittance to Fort Reentry asking why their door key, does not receive thy forbearance; and many works of great repute are now denied to their very own composers make haste, thy dams to repair, for sanctuary is such only to all, young & old when the doors held open by the teeming masses many come here for shelter, the freedom to dare to be artists articulate, not an inner room a Sanctum sanctorum* for the lucky few who came and stayed even though the “gateways” oft were in their face slammed shuttered the only rhyme to poetry, is a four letter key spelt and spilled: f r e e ————— fini ———- “It is enough; now, O Lord, take away my life, for I am no better than my ancestors" Elijah (1 Kings 19:4).** * (Latin for "holy of holies") refers to the innermost, most sacred, and private chamber of a temple or sanctuary. It is commonly used to describe a highly private room, a "retreat," or a place where only a few are allowed, such as a personal office or a revered, restricted space.
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Skinwalkers walk the earth to-night. Skinwalkers walk; some trip and fall. The Skinwalker Moon is blood-red-bright— Skinwalkers walk to the Skinwalker Ball. Until the Skinwalker Moon appears They make their toilette and take their repose. Skinwalkers live on human fears And heads and hearts and fingers and toes. If it happens the sun is shining bright You would say they were waiting for night to fall: They are resting and saving themselves to be right For the Skinwalker Moon and the Skinwalker Ball.
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Mar 2
Mar 2, 2026 at 7:16 PM UTC
The Skinwalker Ball
Hello all, The creator of this wonderful site posted this on the Hello Poetry blog just a few hours ago. It involves the future of HP. See link below.
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Nov 8, 2025
Nov 8, 2025 at 5:10 AM UTC
Message from Eliot York to all of Hello Poetry
========== United States of, as in America's us as toys r us were, conceptually, states r us, res publica for which, we, the whole batch born free, with freedom from the press and adve'tisers, paid a fine loaf a day, for selling free papers, here kid, gitinthegame, easy init ads on comicbooks for magic tricks and GRIT sell this. Sell that, Publisher's Clearing House, you know how, they buy the press run, yeah, they buy all the paper, all the mills, yeah, they own the stock market, the deals who knew what when, is anticipated, slippery, this once then ante climactic we think of ever If now state, present state when we agree, mentally, we are ready readers, we have learned our ABCs, by way of Henson, polylingually free from the limits of sorry old Jos, e-less jo se si se free from certain trust in words, stacks and stacks and stacks, all bundled grunts and hmms, so, n'such all okey A OK Roger out, didah didawdit Your time, paid into my stream, using science, simple as can be, is sublime, so simple, a point when time is as if no time really ever was, then we realize now is, though, real as ever/ A state is a political entity that regulates society and the population within a definite territory.[1] Government is considered to form the fundamental apparatus of contemporary states.[2][3] grip cohesion ceity So, ceity deceitfully may be we agreeing, on whatsoever we do being wedone, we do our fair share, eh… the American, local neighborhood way, on this side of the railroad tracks, out west/
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Oct 9, 2025
Oct 9, 2025 at 5:21 PM UTC
A lift out
========== United States of, as in America's us as toys r us were, conceptually, states r us, res publica for which, we, the whole batch born free, with freedom from the press and adve'tisers, paid a fine loaf a day, for selling free papers, here kid, gitinthegame, easy init ads on comicbooks for magic tricks and GRIT sell this. Sell that, Publisher's Clearing House, you know how, they buy the press run, yeah, they buy all the paper, all the mills, yeah, they own the stock market, the deals who knew what when, is anticipated, slippery, this once then ante climactic we think of ever If now state, present state when we agree, mentally, we are ready readers, we have learned our ABCs, by way of Henson, polylingually free from the limits of sorry old Jos, e-less jo se si se free from certain trust in words, stacks and stacks and stacks, all bundled grunts and hmms, so, n'such all okey A OK Roger out, didah didawdit Your time, paid into my stream, using science, simple as can be, is sublime, so simple, a point when time is as if no time really ever was, then we realize now is, though, real as ever/ A state is a political entity that regulates society and the population within a definite territory.[1] Government is considered to form the fundamental apparatus of contemporary states.[2][3] grip cohesion ceity So, ceity deceitfully may be we agreeing, on whatsoever we do being wedone, we do our fair share, eh… the American, local neighborhood way, on this side of the railroad tracks, out west/
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If Poetry was cornered, and about to be scorched alive he would stand still and strong despite the quivering fear inside. His murderers would begin to sneer, watching Death dangle minutes away, and torcher him before they'd say: "Any last words, on your last day?" He'd swiftly swing open, his delicate pages aflutter as their wretched smiles start to crack and sputter, in shock at the boldness of being openly sighted and so very vulnerable to being instantly ignited just to save the great works of all the world's poets, who poured out their hearts so purposefully in pen. They'd see pieces of Poe, about to exist Nevermore. The words of Angelou, with emotion in store. Frost and Untaken Roads that now all lead to Death. Wordsworth's wisest words, soon to take a final breath. Eliot and The Wasteland will find one another soon. Not even sad Shakespeare is going to last till' noon. As the observing evildoers watched, Poetry paused on a piece prepared: "Because I Could Not Stop for Death," to which they remorsefully stared. What a shame it would be, said proud Poetry, to let these legacies die. the spirits of every poet will haunt you if you try! The mob looked at one another, and quickly fled the scene, leaving the ending as happy as A Midnight Summers Dream!
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Mar 30, 2025
Mar 30, 2025 at 5:52 PM UTC
If Poetry Had to Fight for Its Life...
"Birth, and copulation, and death. That’s all the facts when you come to brass tacks:   Birth, and copulation, and death.”* But though he repeated them twice, Those aren’t all the facts when you  come to brass tacks, Eliot left out a line: Somewhere between copulation and death, When you’re well along, but not near   your last breath, You find that the facts when you come to brass tacks are Ice, ibuprofen and time, My friend, Ice, ibuprofen and time.                 *T.S. Eliot, from Sweeney Agonistes.
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Jan 2, 2025
Jan 2, 2025 at 12:47 PM UTC
Ice, Ibuprofen and Time
* ^ ^ My kitty cat's an imp ra cti cal purrrrrrfect little dainty fat little lady cat who uses her litter box while wearing her white socks. *
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Aug 30, 2024
Aug 30, 2024 at 7:08 AM UTC
An Impractical Cat
“hey.. yes, trying to get some things updated around here… now... so sorry for the outage! but things should be tip top now.. still ironing out a few kinks though Regards”
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Aug 9, 2024
Aug 9, 2024 at 1:54 PM UTC
a note from Eliot...
But I know… this blending of a warped (time) continuum, the future resting on shaky table legs, errors of habitual inconsistency, one on top of a prior, on top of… we pursue regrets, misdeeds, theorizing that we can fix the wobbly mess we instigated, that can we smooth the ruckus that the unknown in surety is bonded to be surly serve up buffet style, we help ourselves to troubles so attractive, like rice thrown at a wedding, dead seeds of messes yet to come *old regrets freshly regretted, for we waste not even what we wanted then even now! for we do not proper value the passing of each momentary, but weep and mourn the entirety of years corrupted by wrong-headed mish-mash of longings, swift stupid inexcusable acts of impulsive weaknesses permitted, so that we dust the dust encasing artificial flowers, that are so faded that the dust mispermits one to fool themselves that they were once , burnt orange vibrant,* like the optimism of a sunny day gone and hoped for just once more yes, I know why… <><> <> **Burnt Norton by T.S.Eliot
** “Time present and time past 
Are both perhaps present in time future
 And time future contained in time past. All time is eternally present 
 All time is unredeemable.
 What might have been is an abstraction 
Remaining a perpetual possibility   
 Only in a world of speculation.
 What might have been and what has been 
Point to one end, which is always present.
 Footfalls echo in the memory
 Down the passage which we did not take 
Towards the door we never opened
 Into the rose-garden. My words echo
, Thus, in your mind.
                                    But to what purpose
 Disturbing the dust on a bowl of rose-leaves I do not know. <><><><>> postscript the rushing to my ever nearer demise the dust suffocates, the regrettables have no half life, and I dust, I know if I do not, I choke…
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Dec 30, 2023
Dec 30, 2023 at 8:39 AM UTC
But I Know, T.S., I know...Burnt Norton
But I know… this blending of a warped (time) continuum, the future resting on shaky table legs, errors of habitual inconsistency, one on top of a prior, on top of… we pursue regrets, misdeeds, theorizing that we can fix the wobbly mess we instigated, that can we smooth the ruckus that the unknown in surety is bonded to be surly serve up buffet style, we help ourselves to troubles so attractive, like rice thrown at a wedding, dead seeds of messes yet to come *old regrets freshly regretted, for we waste not even what we wanted then even now! for we do not proper value the passing of each momentary, but weep and mourn the entirety of years corrupted by wrong-headed mish-mash of longings, swift stupid inexcusable acts of impulsive weaknesses permitted, so that we dust the dust encasing artificial flowers, that are so faded that the dust mispermits one to fool themselves that they were once , burnt orange vibrant,* like the optimism of a sunny day gone and hoped for just once more yes, I know why… <><> <> **Burnt Norton by T.S.Eliot
** “Time present and time past 
Are both perhaps present in time future
 And time future contained in time past. All time is eternally present 
 All time is unredeemable.
 What might have been is an abstraction 
Remaining a perpetual possibility   
 Only in a world of speculation.
 What might have been and what has been 
Point to one end, which is always present.
 Footfalls echo in the memory
 Down the passage which we did not take 
Towards the door we never opened
 Into the rose-garden. My words echo
, Thus, in your mind.
                                    But to what purpose
 Disturbing the dust on a bowl of rose-leaves I do not know. <><><><>> postscript the rushing to my ever nearer demise the dust suffocates, the regrettables have no half life, and I dust, I know if I do not, I choke…
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Is he home? Will he answer the door? Will he take calls? Does he even check his mail anymore?
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Apr 9, 2021
Apr 9, 2021 at 11:49 PM UTC
Are You In?
With the first sign of rebirth Came the gift of time, extended In its renewal and revival, further Offering the restoration of friendly relations All done as an act of reconciliation between progress As well as forgiveness asked of our mothers, everyday Within such gifts intended for the common crowd It is at the stroke of the halcyon hour That we forget our sorrows and crumble like bricks What is of this sad ending that we talk of, intentionally That plagues the essence of the mind which is white as snow and trembling Only cloudy days can show us the purity of ice When the clouds do subside, the sweetness that preside All talk is forced into stony silence under the dark night Through the mad-sort of palace of time Where there is a time to withdraw into the study of history Ashes to ashes as well as fire to fire Dwelling in a cold curlicle of a silent galvanized gate at a cemetery Behind a rose garden, where the woodpeckers beak at the windowpane Rusted beyond recognition broken into windy submission Such things are built for no purpose and no future promise Only to sustain posterity and labour Not to make use of Earthly resources An old man still waits for the rain Saying that he is hiding behind the arras of an isolated house Where the sepulchre is hidden under a rock tattered by zephyr A string of creeper prostrate themselves, whimpering That ostensibly grow, under the shadow of a thatched roof Only to never be seen again in daylight Of rebirth and redemption Such is the creeper in the daylight That lives in utter recluse and retreat
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May 19, 2020
May 19, 2020 at 5:11 PM UTC
The Daylight Creeper
With the first sign of rebirth Came the gift of time, extended In its renewal and revival, further Offering the restoration of friendly relations All done as an act of reconciliation between progress As well as forgiveness asked of our mothers, everyday Within such gifts intended for the common crowd It is at the stroke of the halcyon hour That we forget our sorrows and crumble like bricks What is of this sad ending that we talk of, intentionally That plagues the essence of the mind which is white as snow and trembling Only cloudy days can show us the purity of ice When the clouds do subside, the sweetness that preside All talk is forced into stony silence under the dark night Through the mad-sort of palace of time Where there is a time to withdraw into the study of history Ashes to ashes as well as fire to fire Dwelling in a cold curlicle of a silent galvanized gate at a cemetery Behind a rose garden, where the woodpeckers beak at the windowpane Rusted beyond recognition broken into windy submission Such things are built for no purpose and no future promise Only to sustain posterity and labour Not to make use of Earthly resources An old man still waits for the rain Saying that he is hiding behind the arras of an isolated house Where the sepulchre is hidden under a rock tattered by zephyr A string of creeper prostrate themselves, whimpering That ostensibly grow, under the shadow of a thatched roof Only to never be seen again in daylight Of rebirth and redemption Such is the creeper in the daylight That lives in utter recluse and retreat
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You came again With his shroud Your hunger and pain I could see and love In his mouth Asking me to Love those eyes and face You offered a tulip, with a bow After you lift your countenance We walk hand in hand, ashore
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Apr 21, 2020
Apr 21, 2020 at 11:06 AM UTC
The Lovely Bones
BLACK KETTLE I am a black kettle But inside of me is a colourless water I sit on fire everyday And they deny me of the dinning table I am a black kettle Albeit, people make me what I am Yet, I wouldn't prefer to be in isolation On the zenith of kukuruku's hill I am a black kettle Never judge me by my look My dream and goal gives me the temporal colour Inside of me is my natural color I am a black kettle But despite the litany of woes I have a consolation As long as there's an entity called washing and rinsing I will always have my true nature retained. -'Bintan Ola ©2019
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Apr 20, 2020
Apr 20, 2020 at 10:33 AM UTC
Black kettle
METABOLIC LOVE Behold the strength in your weakness Which is capable of giving vigour to my membrane Chlorophyll in chloroplast makes the green plant blossom You make the smile on my face radiant Come, let's mix the right nucleotide sequence of our desired RNA And build the sequence of our desired protein So that the expression of our gene Will be the desire of friends and relatives Amidst thousands, you're the only one I chose Your hotness could denature enzymes There exist a thousand of competitive inhibitor But by the words of my mouth; None would fit to my active site I want to fly on your wings to the horizon Regardless of the barbaric thought of men For I know; All unwanted functional unit of life Will die by apoptosis. -'Bintan Ola [email protected]
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Apr 20, 2020
Apr 20, 2020 at 10:32 AM UTC
Metabolic love
The murderer and the murdered There is a crime scene Down the market square, beside a canteen What do we say of yards of yellow tape? And hope these flung wrappers do not indicate **** Pandemonium, my subconscious mind listened Roar and uproar, as van mirrors glistened Hellena is the name of a little black girl who was shot She fell to the ground as blood refused to clot Hope the shot did not **** her thoughts and dreams Like balloons, squandered down a vessel's beam She is not the only one whose mind has been blown Her family screamed; "are we alone?" Who will make justice descend from heaven? So fast, such as at the count of seven Kendrick is the name of the merciless murderer Looking for a green pasture? Better be a laborer My lord, I am guilty of my offence Sentenced to lifetime imprisonment despite advocate's defence On the clinic bed, Hellena coughed to life Consciousness regained. Her dreams and thoughts came back to life. -'Bintan Ola [email protected]
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Apr 20, 2020
Apr 20, 2020 at 3:01 AM UTC
The murderer and the murdered
So go ahead and tell me, child. Would it all have been worthwhile To tread upon Eliot's allusiory notion Having bitten off the matter with a smile Negating warnings, blinded by devotion? To have squeezed the universe into a ball During our days to ****** and create Amnesic to past transgressions of a dying fall Divulging the insidious question upon our plate? Daring to disturb the song of the universe Repeating the same indecisions and revisions In which we must ultimately reverse?
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Feb 12, 2020
Feb 12, 2020 at 2:56 PM UTC
the interrogation of j. alfred prufrock։ an amended love song.
anyone know why profile and cover photos refuse to upload?
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Oct 28, 2019
Oct 28, 2019 at 10:11 PM UTC
questionku - profile and cover photos
Oh Eliot, Poor Eliot, Your Fans Hung You in the Closet and I'm Feelin' So Sad^ <> we tithed thee with donations plenty, here a dollar, there a fiver, a coupon for free chips, worthy of somebody’s eternal gratitude, that would be you, da Duke, Duke of York the largest online free poetry site, a million visitors a day, why you must be the richest poet online billionaire, right? you, da Duke, Duke of York and occasional poet... in return, all we occasional poets demand steady on instant access, immediate satisfaction, after all, a part time job deserves your bestus-best, just like every other large online site, that never crashes, we’re not like just the rest, we are p o e t s, occasionally so keep the servers engines, well stoked with Newcastle coal, keep them up and running round the clock, using only alternative energy, of the unceasing sun light of merry old England! quit that other job, you must, instead of giving up on us, give in to us, a poetry break, a writing recharge, though please add a limited liability clause to the FAQ’s, that poets’ lives must deal with the hiccup occasional you, da Duke, Duke of York, newly now, an appointment royale as Major General,^^ you, the very model of a modern major general possessing information vegetable, animal, mineral and technical, who knows the Queens  of England, who, maybe even now is telling tales of your heroics with the hordes of hysterical occasional poetical globalists demanding light brigadests charging the redoubt and when you have a moment spare, a haircut, please. no, that is not a request, naturally <> 10/19/19 Noontime NYC natalino
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Oct 19, 2019
Oct 19, 2019 at 12:21 PM UTC
Oh Eliot, Poor Eliot, Your Fans Hung You in the Closet and I'm Feelin' So Sad
Oh Eliot, Poor Eliot, Your Fans Hung You in the Closet and I'm Feelin' So Sad^ <> we tithed thee with donations plenty, here a dollar, there a fiver, a coupon for free chips, worthy of somebody’s eternal gratitude, that would be you, da Duke, Duke of York the largest online free poetry site, a million visitors a day, why you must be the richest poet online billionaire, right? you, da Duke, Duke of York and occasional poet... in return, all we occasional poets demand steady on instant access, immediate satisfaction, after all, a part time job deserves your bestus-best, just like every other large online site, that never crashes, we’re not like just the rest, we are p o e t s, occasionally so keep the servers engines, well stoked with Newcastle coal, keep them up and running round the clock, using only alternative energy, of the unceasing sun light of merry old England! quit that other job, you must, instead of giving up on us, give in to us, a poetry break, a writing recharge, though please add a limited liability clause to the FAQ’s, that poets’ lives must deal with the hiccup occasional you, da Duke, Duke of York, newly now, an appointment royale as Major General,^^ you, the very model of a modern major general possessing information vegetable, animal, mineral and technical, who knows the Queens  of England, who, maybe even now is telling tales of your heroics with the hordes of hysterical occasional poetical globalists demanding light brigadests charging the redoubt and when you have a moment spare, a haircut, please. no, that is not a request, naturally <> 10/19/19 Noontime NYC natalino
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VERS VOOR EEN PERS De hemelzangers trekken allemaal Naar de groene velden van Frankendael. Onder de struiken bestaat geen rust Voor het suffe brein, de sterke lust En de schielijke ogen van Pluizenbaal. Er is geen bevrijding zonder lijden. O wanneer is het knarsend hart moe? Wanneer geeft de krakende zetel toe? Moet deze zomerdag echt verscheiden? Wanneer zal de tijd voorgoed verglijden?
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Jul 30, 2019
Jul 30, 2019 at 11:32 PM UTC
Lines to a Persian Cat - T.S. Eliot
She says she has an opening At 9:15 a.m. Thursday morning. Whose permission do I need To respond to what is essentially My own request, my own persistence, My own action. Do I regret it Or don’t I? Do I dare to eat this peach? Do I dare to bring this moment-- At 9:15 Thursday morning-- To its crisis? Will the mermaids still not sing to me When I become less willing to drown, Or will they sing louder than for Anyone else, for want of that Which they cannot have? I will arrive at 9:15 a.m. On Thursday morning With the bottoms of my trousers rolled, Not to dip my feet into the Misleadingly temperate waters, But to show a counselor The over-worn, many-colored And many-patterned Socks that I wear Much too often, And she will tell me It’s warm enough outside To just wear sandals.
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Apr 27, 2019
Apr 27, 2019 at 7:05 PM UTC
A Lovesong
The troll's return the presence burns it's not like they understand pushing thumbs, pretty dumb always sad, and down Eliot in absentsia wonder if he's here lost controls given to trolls thumbing all around It's always said ya make your bed stupid can't be fixed trolls abound that whining sound nothing but twits and *****
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Apr 22, 2019
Apr 22, 2019 at 10:49 PM UTC
Trolly unwholesome