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i escape through a lush country, green beyond belief in itself, where the sweet root calls as birds in summer heat and peace is an underwhelming joy. if i could give you a question to ask of them and place it bullet like in the rich air, a question unseeming, redundant to an old man yet appropriate to the young, it would be a question heavy with doubt, dignity, pregnant with faith, insolent in a single word why. && all that lives in this place knows the same, under moon and sun and stars, feels the blooming brush, breath life and surrender. night’s oldest tales told stiff. will become myth wanting from us what it passes to us, as it shames us what people want. what they never know but feel, in the same way, that birds know the bodies and heartbeats, of the birds they follow, is the soft wind wearing shining mountains to sand not immediately, but long and patiently, is the chance of religion, life in stone and the deepest *********** invisible? we struggle to see, and find what is visible like sundown and sunrise, hidden or cloudless, and it burns and it is beautiful as it burns. how could we want more?
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Mar 14
Mar 14, 2026 at 3:25 AM UTC
my fathers' faiths - parts 3&4
i escape through a lush country, green beyond belief in itself, where the sweet root calls as birds in summer heat and peace is an underwhelming joy. if i could give you a question to ask of them and place it bullet like in the rich air, a question unseeming, redundant to an old man yet appropriate to the young, it would be a question heavy with doubt, dignity, pregnant with faith, insolent in a single word why. && all that lives in this place knows the same, under moon and sun and stars, feels the blooming brush, breath life and surrender. night’s oldest tales told stiff. will become myth wanting from us what it passes to us, as it shames us what people want. what they never know but feel, in the same way, that birds know the bodies and heartbeats, of the birds they follow, is the soft wind wearing shining mountains to sand not immediately, but long and patiently, is the chance of religion, life in stone and the deepest *********** invisible? we struggle to see, and find what is visible like sundown and sunrise, hidden or cloudless, and it burns and it is beautiful as it burns. how could we want more?
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72/M/Northern Illinois
Mar 14
Mar 14, 2026 at 3:25 AM UTC
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