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I used to crave the way you loved me; it was honey-sweet, Until the turn—until it went sour enough to spit out. Now you’ve found a new rhythm, a new girl, a future wife, While you keep reaching back to me, trying to mend the past. But "sorry" doesn't wash away the flavor you left behind; That bitter aftertaste still follows me every time I see your face.
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Mar 9
Mar 9, 2026 at 11:03 AM UTC
Sour
I used to crave the way you loved me; it was honey-sweet, Until the turn—until it went sour enough to spit out. Now you’ve found a new rhythm, a new girl, a future wife, While you keep reaching back to me, trying to mend the past. But "sorry" doesn't wash away the flavor you left behind; That bitter aftertaste still follows me every time I see your face.
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15/F/lost
Mar 9
Mar 9, 2026 at 11:03 AM UTC
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