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Like splitting waves Like tearing skin I open up I tell them And they tell me From the outside, It’s like a game You see pieces you can put together ‘Do this’ ‘do that’ Advice But on the inside It’s more like That hurricane It isn’t like I can get out By some words I read Or some powerful speech Words are moving But they’re only a fraction of time I can ask and look But nothing helps It doesn’t change anything It’s just more words And noise That yell ‘Why haven’t you figured it out yet?!’
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Mar 7
Mar 7, 2026 at 12:09 PM UTC
3 - Open Up
Like splitting waves Like tearing skin I open up I tell them And they tell me From the outside, It’s like a game You see pieces you can put together ‘Do this’ ‘do that’ Advice But on the inside It’s more like That hurricane It isn’t like I can get out By some words I read Or some powerful speech Words are moving But they’re only a fraction of time I can ask and look But nothing helps It doesn’t change anything It’s just more words And noise That yell ‘Why haven’t you figured it out yet?!’
This is the 3rd poem in my ‘Forgiveness’ series.
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Mar 7
Mar 7, 2026 at 12:09 PM UTC
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