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Have I said too much? Crossing lines, I didn’t know existed Nothing controversial, just a little Bit out there A shake of the head And the curtain falls Shut out behind some opaque veil More impenetrable than steel Have I said too much? Have you ever felt betrayed by a song Mondegreen, what a cold ***** One line misheard, and now the Song no longer makes sense Or maybe too much sense. All comfort has flown and I’m left – wondering if I said too much. (C) November 28, 2025
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Feb 27
Feb 27, 2026 at 10:19 AM UTC
Have I said too much?
Have I said too much? Crossing lines, I didn’t know existed Nothing controversial, just a little Bit out there A shake of the head And the curtain falls Shut out behind some opaque veil More impenetrable than steel Have I said too much? Have you ever felt betrayed by a song Mondegreen, what a cold ***** One line misheard, and now the Song no longer makes sense Or maybe too much sense. All comfort has flown and I’m left – wondering if I said too much. (C) November 28, 2025
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Feb 27, 2026 at 10:19 AM UTC
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