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If you don’t drink all night and and smoke your lungs to tar, Are you even doing it right. Are you living your life, All the to the bar. Are you meeting the goal? Are you leading the leader board? Are you bored with your life? Can you grasp what it takes to be happy, To be alive and not living? When your tired do you keeping going, You do keep the dream alive? To strive for greatness, To be great. What’s the difference from love and gate? What’s the limit to living, What the price for love? To you want to keep going, Or lay down n the dirt? Do you surrender to hurt, Or heal for satisfaction?
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Feb 15
Feb 15, 2026 at 12:40 AM UTC
Satisfaction
If you don’t drink all night and and smoke your lungs to tar, Are you even doing it right. Are you living your life, All the to the bar. Are you meeting the goal? Are you leading the leader board? Are you bored with your life? Can you grasp what it takes to be happy, To be alive and not living? When your tired do you keeping going, You do keep the dream alive? To strive for greatness, To be great. What’s the difference from love and gate? What’s the limit to living, What the price for love? To you want to keep going, Or lay down n the dirt? Do you surrender to hurt, Or heal for satisfaction?
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Feb 15
Feb 15, 2026 at 12:40 AM UTC
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