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On governed introspection’s gaze By winding through that zigzag maze I saw my past, both guilt and glee And I know why you ran from me. My heart, though closed to outside threat, Still yearns to pay some endless debt It hurts to feel and hurts to see Since I found why you ran from me. This inner fight takes all my steel ‘tween minds that think and hearts that feel These circled paths can’t make men free So I know why you ran from me Hushed turmoil builds, still buried deep Both makes men seem and feel asleep It leaves no room for reverie Still I know why you ran from me The unfurled flags grow redder still While planted on this war-torn hill Now I know why you ran from me For you saw codependency.
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Dec 30, 2025
Dec 30, 2025 at 3:55 PM UTC
On Closer Look
On governed introspection’s gaze By winding through that zigzag maze I saw my past, both guilt and glee And I know why you ran from me. My heart, though closed to outside threat, Still yearns to pay some endless debt It hurts to feel and hurts to see Since I found why you ran from me. This inner fight takes all my steel ‘tween minds that think and hearts that feel These circled paths can’t make men free So I know why you ran from me Hushed turmoil builds, still buried deep Both makes men seem and feel asleep It leaves no room for reverie Still I know why you ran from me The unfurled flags grow redder still While planted on this war-torn hill Now I know why you ran from me For you saw codependency.
I have written poetry intermittently as I've been inspired by life lessons. Writing poetry helps me to understand the world more clearly. I wrote this poem after being turned down in what seemed to be a promising relationship. It took me time to understand why I was turned down, but with time the event helped me realize a flaw in myself that has encouraged me to become healthier in my behavior with myself and with others. Thank you for taking the time to read this.
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46/M/California
Dec 30, 2025
Dec 30, 2025 at 3:55 PM UTC
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