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From afar, it looks surreal This wan future I think true But what I claim I know is there Many others see right through Such romantic ideation Makes it easy to stay far For I know on my approaching I will see things as they are While I dream of what I’ve made it I forget to count the cost Since in staring at this fiction I don't see the time I’ve lost But that scene I thought was waiting Is in fact a better place For the distance keeps me lonely While the closeness brings embrace Although fantasy is easy For we men who don’t want near Choosing truth with imperfection Will do more to settle fear When the haze of your own fiction Dissipates to what is true You find meaning in the desert And become more real, too.
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Dec 30, 2025
Dec 30, 2025 at 3:44 PM UTC
Mirage
From afar, it looks surreal This wan future I think true But what I claim I know is there Many others see right through Such romantic ideation Makes it easy to stay far For I know on my approaching I will see things as they are While I dream of what I’ve made it I forget to count the cost Since in staring at this fiction I don't see the time I’ve lost But that scene I thought was waiting Is in fact a better place For the distance keeps me lonely While the closeness brings embrace Although fantasy is easy For we men who don’t want near Choosing truth with imperfection Will do more to settle fear When the haze of your own fiction Dissipates to what is true You find meaning in the desert And become more real, too.
This is about the tendency of some of us to remain single because we prefer romantic ideals of love instead of the real, imperfect thing. My goal was to show that the imperfect, but real, love is more meaningful and fulfilling than the loneliness of romantic ideas of love. I use the symbol of a mirage in a desert to illustrate the idealization of love, which, though beautiful, we find is just a figment of our imagination.
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46/M/California
Dec 30, 2025
Dec 30, 2025 at 3:44 PM UTC
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