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Wuxing Category: Earth (土) 3-xx Look upon the great mountain, its immense, soaring peaks Silent and snow-capped, forming a towering, white vista The fresh powder sparkles in the intensely cold atmosphere Dusk shimmers across the glass surface of the emerald lake A majestic view framed by the picturesque window pane She stands calmly within, warmed by the mug in her two hands Her steady gaze follows the soft pastels of the sun setting Into the broad, still expanse of the silent winterscape. I see this woman, my love, wrapped in the thick, heavy blanket ___The Auspicious Slumber___ now takes a secondary position to her gentle grace She simply stares at the wild, wide natural wonder before her I know she is absorbing the pristine serenity, the shifting mountain light I, however, see only her inherent beauty; the vast landscape completely fades The specific awe held in her quiet eyes fills me with silent, deep questions And I can only be present, watching her, wondering as I so often do How did I become so lucky, to stand here in her radiant light? And why, amongst all the others, did her strong spirit choose only me? Sunrise breaks slowly on the mountain, cold and quietly The mountain air holds a moment perfectly frozen in measured time A snow rabbit peeks out, beginning its foraging through the white snowdrift A lone grey wolf scouts the high ridge line—an ancient, auspicious sign Native lore whispers through the highest skybound pine branches On the veranda, enduring the bitter cold, bundled for warmth, He stands He is observing the wildlife, completely immersed in the clear, sharp air He looks back, momentarily, through that vast picturesque window pane. He looks back through the glass at her quiet, sleeping figure ___The Auspicious Slumber___ reveals a face bare and completely peaceful Her hair is tousled, her almond eyes are blissfully at rest in deep slumber He tracks the steady rhythm of her calm, gentle breathing A slight twitch of her hand occurs, followed by a soft smile on her lips He wonders what unseen world she is traveling through now Is she dreaming of the man standing here, or the grand mountain landscape? Does her dream hold only the morning's shifting colors, or the love she feels? This deep peace is the foundation where my own true world begins.
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Dec 12, 2025
Dec 12, 2025 at 8:52 PM UTC
The Auspicious Slumber (2025)
Wuxing Category: Earth (土) 3-xx Look upon the great mountain, its immense, soaring peaks Silent and snow-capped, forming a towering, white vista The fresh powder sparkles in the intensely cold atmosphere Dusk shimmers across the glass surface of the emerald lake A majestic view framed by the picturesque window pane She stands calmly within, warmed by the mug in her two hands Her steady gaze follows the soft pastels of the sun setting Into the broad, still expanse of the silent winterscape. I see this woman, my love, wrapped in the thick, heavy blanket ___The Auspicious Slumber___ now takes a secondary position to her gentle grace She simply stares at the wild, wide natural wonder before her I know she is absorbing the pristine serenity, the shifting mountain light I, however, see only her inherent beauty; the vast landscape completely fades The specific awe held in her quiet eyes fills me with silent, deep questions And I can only be present, watching her, wondering as I so often do How did I become so lucky, to stand here in her radiant light? And why, amongst all the others, did her strong spirit choose only me? Sunrise breaks slowly on the mountain, cold and quietly The mountain air holds a moment perfectly frozen in measured time A snow rabbit peeks out, beginning its foraging through the white snowdrift A lone grey wolf scouts the high ridge line—an ancient, auspicious sign Native lore whispers through the highest skybound pine branches On the veranda, enduring the bitter cold, bundled for warmth, He stands He is observing the wildlife, completely immersed in the clear, sharp air He looks back, momentarily, through that vast picturesque window pane. He looks back through the glass at her quiet, sleeping figure ___The Auspicious Slumber___ reveals a face bare and completely peaceful Her hair is tousled, her almond eyes are blissfully at rest in deep slumber He tracks the steady rhythm of her calm, gentle breathing A slight twitch of her hand occurs, followed by a soft smile on her lips He wonders what unseen world she is traveling through now Is she dreaming of the man standing here, or the grand mountain landscape? Does her dream hold only the morning's shifting colors, or the love she feels? This deep peace is the foundation where my own true world begins.
Project Title: Elements of the Heart Volume 3: Earth (土) - Stability and Connection Poem #3-xx See collection for description.
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Dec 12, 2025
Dec 12, 2025 at 8:52 PM UTC
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