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if it all went away today, would you still be mine? if it all went away today, will i be fine? the clock just ticks away, and these wasted years have left me astray. i can’t re-live, and live in fear, but i don’t know how to set myself free. (is anybody there?) i’m not well, and time will tell when the pieces finally fit together, and i make sense of this hell. if it all went away today, would you still be mine?
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Nov 22, 2025
Nov 22, 2025 at 5:05 AM UTC
would you still be mine?
if it all went away today, would you still be mine? if it all went away today, will i be fine? the clock just ticks away, and these wasted years have left me astray. i can’t re-live, and live in fear, but i don’t know how to set myself free. (is anybody there?) i’m not well, and time will tell when the pieces finally fit together, and i make sense of this hell. if it all went away today, would you still be mine?
Written with Foo Fighters’ “Beyond Me” echoing in the background. This one’s for what’s left after goodbye — the quiet, the ache, the small wish that love could still hear you across the silence. Companion piece to Judgement of the Beat.
joshua-phelps
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33/M/English
Nov 22, 2025
Nov 22, 2025 at 5:05 AM UTC
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