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when did it all become this superficial? the codified human experience and commodified aspects of life. the more i connect, the more i disconnect. the more i take, the less i gain. the less the more, the more the less. maybe it is just a part of growing up.
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Nov 12, 2025
Nov 12, 2025 at 6:02 PM UTC
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when did it all become this superficial? the codified human experience and commodified aspects of life. the more i connect, the more i disconnect. the more i take, the less i gain. the less the more, the more the less. maybe it is just a part of growing up.
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Nov 12, 2025
Nov 12, 2025 at 6:02 PM UTC
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