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#superficial
when did it all become this superficial? the codified human experience and commodified aspects of life. the more i connect, the more i disconnect. the more i take, the less i gain. the less the more, the more the less. maybe it is just a part of growing up.
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Nov 12, 2025
Nov 12, 2025 at 6:02 PM UTC
material life
Customary greetings Mechanical responses No affection No obligation When did human interactions become this superficial?
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Aug 14, 2025
Aug 14, 2025 at 10:57 PM UTC
Superficial
Is it coincidence that anagrams of OSTENTATIOUSLY include SNOOTILY ASTUTE and TONIEST OUTLAYS? Or does Ostentatiously have a superficial meaning with ulterior motives lurking inside?
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May 28, 2025
May 28, 2025 at 4:25 PM UTC
What's inside?
"I see you in both ways- not the optimist. He fails to choose naturally. You are that one cake among the rest that presents herself with multiple coats of frosting, no one would dare cut you open after appreciating your beauty - he's afraid to taste something suspicious."
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Dec 7, 2024
Dec 7, 2024 at 5:47 PM UTC
Be careful.
I hated it. Every single time you called me beautiful, I hated it. I get it; I have blue eyes, long hair, a thin body. Everything you wanted. But there's so much more to me than that. I bet you wouldn't have liked me if I had shorter hair and a little extra weight. That's why I realized I don't want a guy who constantly calls me beautiful. I want to be called mesmerizing, fascinating, breathtaking. Those words say much more about the real me than "beautiful" ever will.
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Jul 29, 2023
Jul 29, 2023 at 1:47 AM UTC
beautiful
i scroll through the contacts on my phone and realise there is no one i can call nobody i can text people ive had for 7 years maybe more their care for me has gone void and i can sense it can't you see? it's all superficial every conversation every look it is all superficial and i can blame anyone and anything for it but none of that will change the truth and none of it will gift me a new outcome so now i sit alone in a void room and i wonder who will notice who will care when i am all but gone for they will notice when i take my last breath but nobody notices the moments before not from afar
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Aug 16, 2021
Aug 16, 2021 at 4:25 AM UTC
alone
She wears the mask of beauty. Beautifully wicked. She hides behind a face so perfect. Starry eyes and glossy lips. The beauty is in her eyes. She covers herself with a body of a goddess. Great curves, nice round breast with thighs that match her amazingly. I wish I was her. The way that flowing gown drapes around her body, showing off her outer beauty. Screaming fans all around her as she stands in this populated town as limos surround. The lens of cameras shutters as women in flowing dresses walk pass, as paparazzi’s mutters and shouts. The way she walks. She walks in beauty like the night. And every step she takes, they all meet in her aspect. 1 step, 2 step, 3 step, 4, magazines are photo-shooting her, she’s soon to be on the cover. 5 step, 6 step, 7 steps, 8, screaming fans and all they do is stare and hover. 9 step, 10. I want the heels of my stilettos to feel the dark red carpet of fame beneath, as she stands on that carpet with people in awe of her presence. Women compete for the category of best eyes, best hair, best clothes and best bare. They are all beautiful. But she stands out even more, for her beauty is rare. Beauty is her. The walk of fame has her name. Beast is me. The category that I’m under is unknown to our universe, drifting through space of broken dreams. Endless nightmares of a world, where I was beautiful, where I was fair, where I was elegant, with a beauty that can’t be covered with makeup. Because true beauty has no flaws. I’m trapped in my head and there’s no way out. I’m screaming and crying, but there’s no-one to hear me. No doctor or pill can take the pain away. People will never understand. I heard beauty is that which pleases and delights, but when I see beauty, I break down and cry. Of course, I consider beauty for hours. In mirrors.
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Nov 29, 2025
Nov 29, 2025 at 12:30 AM UTC
that beautiful woman
She wears the mask of beauty. Beautifully wicked. She hides behind a face so perfect. Starry eyes and glossy lips. The beauty is in her eyes. She covers herself with a body of a goddess. Great curves, nice round breast with thighs that match her amazingly. I wish I was her. The way that flowing gown drapes around her body, showing off her outer beauty. Screaming fans all around her as she stands in this populated town as limos surround. The lens of cameras shutters as women in flowing dresses walk pass, as paparazzi’s mutters and shouts. The way she walks. She walks in beauty like the night. And every step she takes, they all meet in her aspect. 1 step, 2 step, 3 step, 4, magazines are photo-shooting her, she’s soon to be on the cover. 5 step, 6 step, 7 steps, 8, screaming fans and all they do is stare and hover. 9 step, 10. I want the heels of my stilettos to feel the dark red carpet of fame beneath, as she stands on that carpet with people in awe of her presence. Women compete for the category of best eyes, best hair, best clothes and best bare. They are all beautiful. But she stands out even more, for her beauty is rare. Beauty is her. The walk of fame has her name. Beast is me. The category that I’m under is unknown to our universe, drifting through space of broken dreams. Endless nightmares of a world, where I was beautiful, where I was fair, where I was elegant, with a beauty that can’t be covered with makeup. Because true beauty has no flaws. I’m trapped in my head and there’s no way out. I’m screaming and crying, but there’s no-one to hear me. No doctor or pill can take the pain away. People will never understand. I heard beauty is that which pleases and delights, but when I see beauty, I break down and cry. Of course, I consider beauty for hours. In mirrors.
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Darling, do not tell me that you are more beautiful with those drawings on your skin. You've convinced yourself that they mean so much to you, and no one can even begin to understand, but I want you to know that the real beauty of an individual is more than simply skin deep. That is why the ink on your skin does not impress me. Everyone has stories and scars —I just choose not to wear mine on the outside.
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Feb 24, 2021
Feb 24, 2021 at 1:01 AM UTC
Skin
there are good souls in this world shrouded in weathered skin dry and cracked with scowls hung upon their face balancing on the scars of their brow just as there are bad souls in this world hiding under plush skin their faces adorned with kind eyes and cherry red lips made for kissing or spitting with rage picture a gorgeous brunette with fair skin, bold eyebrows and her hair in a subtle yet nineteen-thirties style updo wearing a red chiffon summer dress the sun beats down on her as she glistens with light perspiration espresso in-hand cigarette in the other her pale soft skin no match for the thirty degree heat outside of this café she nonchalantly finds herself she is the epitome of carefree beauty she kicked her lovers dog outside this morning exiling him to a six hour long toilet break after she "forgot" she had let him out before leaving to go shopping whilst her feller finished his shift because the dog is old and smelly and gets almost as much attention as her she even saw his pensioner neighbour struggling to take the bins out as she walked to her car and laughed rather than help because she always thought Mary was a no good Jew she even called her Mrs. Goldstein "Have a nice day Mrs. Goldstein." but Mary's surname is Cohen picture this beautiful girl a siren leading good men astray she can get any man she wants and plucks only the finest most succulent I mean successful and well put together men from gardens of bachelors maturing in the hardships of city life she has plenty choice but she's fickle you see, her man has to be almost perfect for it to be as enjoyable as possible to watch his life unravel and unfold into everything he wanted it not to be achievable only through toxic beauty her joy is venom soaked insides of lovers caught in a sultry web of lies, ambition and *** she loves a scandal or a text sent to the wrong person and she has everything to hide but does nothing to do so she gets by just fine being beautiful and sickening and sickeningly beautiful you know the sort she is a bad, bad girl
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Feb 1, 2021
Feb 1, 2021 at 9:07 PM UTC
Good Souls and Bad Girls
there are good souls in this world shrouded in weathered skin dry and cracked with scowls hung upon their face balancing on the scars of their brow just as there are bad souls in this world hiding under plush skin their faces adorned with kind eyes and cherry red lips made for kissing or spitting with rage picture a gorgeous brunette with fair skin, bold eyebrows and her hair in a subtle yet nineteen-thirties style updo wearing a red chiffon summer dress the sun beats down on her as she glistens with light perspiration espresso in-hand cigarette in the other her pale soft skin no match for the thirty degree heat outside of this café she nonchalantly finds herself she is the epitome of carefree beauty she kicked her lovers dog outside this morning exiling him to a six hour long toilet break after she "forgot" she had let him out before leaving to go shopping whilst her feller finished his shift because the dog is old and smelly and gets almost as much attention as her she even saw his pensioner neighbour struggling to take the bins out as she walked to her car and laughed rather than help because she always thought Mary was a no good Jew she even called her Mrs. Goldstein "Have a nice day Mrs. Goldstein." but Mary's surname is Cohen picture this beautiful girl a siren leading good men astray she can get any man she wants and plucks only the finest most succulent I mean successful and well put together men from gardens of bachelors maturing in the hardships of city life she has plenty choice but she's fickle you see, her man has to be almost perfect for it to be as enjoyable as possible to watch his life unravel and unfold into everything he wanted it not to be achievable only through toxic beauty her joy is venom soaked insides of lovers caught in a sultry web of lies, ambition and *** she loves a scandal or a text sent to the wrong person and she has everything to hide but does nothing to do so she gets by just fine being beautiful and sickening and sickeningly beautiful you know the sort she is a bad, bad girl
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Queen Antonym of Superficial, I wish the pseudonym of your official name was just your name. Your anonymity is so much more to pity, as your antonyms are only pretty, and their anonymity is in their substance.
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Oct 2, 2020
Oct 2, 2020 at 4:42 PM UTC
Queen Antonym of Superficial
One day your looks will dissipate Like the steam from boiling water Gradually but inevitably Your physicality will falter Superficiality Is joyous to an extent When you're young and exploring life But you can't always depend On materials and shallow links To bring you what a connection can When you're on your death bed Whether wealthy or simply meeting ends Superficiality fades When all you crave is to hold a hand
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May 29, 2020
May 29, 2020 at 2:00 PM UTC
One Day
i met him at a masquerade, a silly place where people do not need names. wearing the mystery of the night, dancing under the raw spotlight, his honey lips, his indecisive eyes were feeding innocent souls with lies. but then i saw him, at midnight, alone and hidden with his one light -the lonely moon, the queen of dead in front of whom his cheeks turned red. he was just a tragic moonlover when the masquarade was over. oh, that poor disguised angel made falling in love seem so fatal...
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May 24, 2020
May 24, 2020 at 9:33 AM UTC
masquerade
What happened to all the beautiful girls? Ones with fire in their eyes and gold in their chest What happened to the precious pearls? Who flowed like the wind and shone like the stars. Did the ocean take away their sweet treasures? And leave behind these empty shells Whose shallow exterior can never measure To the gem that lay within. Did they ascend from the Earth? And leave behind their shed skin Whose plasticity cannot worth The firmness that they held within. Did the fire burn out their light? And in their place plant seeds dud Whose bitter fruits cannot incite The fiery passion they fuelled. Did the Earth swallow them whole? And replace them with thorns Which cannot fill the empty holes That they left behind. Or maybe it was the work of man Who took those girls for granted Moulded them to suit their wants And bred them to the expectations they implanted.
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May 14, 2020
May 14, 2020 at 6:27 PM UTC
Beautiful Girls
a cornerstone of brown was the station here as a hemisphere was the quest that starts with pastry in a morning of wake up the roses are bleeding yet there's nobody to cultivate blood
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Apr 16, 2020
Apr 16, 2020 at 8:08 AM UTC
cornerstone
It basically goes like this at the point of birth onward, we are all seedlings encapsulated by a thick glass. when we are all very, very young our glass orb is our entire world we have not filled the glass just yet with out a passion, or roaring spirit. Many days will be spent stagnant inside our self absorbed orb looking at the mirror what you see is dependent on how far you are willing to look. Have you ever stopped your youth to look past yourself and see the pain others go through? To see there is more out there than this orb? sad to say some don't ever see past their own reflection have you ever really noticed yourself becoming aware? As we grow deep and develop its only natural to fill those void within ourselves our ambition becomes too big for our little world a destruction of self, but a creation of space. Yes, we can actually reach this potential! We can break our glass orbs! and then you can see this "Whole Big World" has all of us in it. Together. Humanity at its finest. But there are some, who are so mindless and content with this space we all share. For some they never see past the mirror. That is why you can meet someone at any point in their life whose still too conscious of themselves and have never cracked the glass of their own little world.
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May 2, 2017
May 2, 2017 at 8:45 PM UTC
How to grow up
only answers when there's pictures only picks up when I'm undressed only tells that he loves me when I'm looking at my best I've stopped answering your calls now I'm leaving you on read I want to real love not lust inside your bed
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Mar 24, 2020
Mar 24, 2020 at 1:39 AM UTC
superficial
Where have all the good girls gone? The ones who prefer brains to brawn. Today's girls seem to like tattoos; They like bad boys who bring bad news. When I grew up the girls were classy. They were smart and kind and super sassy. But now they're shallow and superficial; They're so covetous and artificial. Love should be about heart and soul. About the truth that makes us whole. Forget Facebook and Instagram; Just talk to me: I'm an old school man. ©canadian_cowboy
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Oct 7, 2019
Oct 7, 2019 at 10:25 AM UTC
GOOD GIRLS
People called him short, stout, comical-looking, but I felt compassion for him and I wondered what experiences would give him joy and happiness?
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Jul 25, 2019
Jul 25, 2019 at 2:44 AM UTC
Punchinelo
She was more than her skin color. She was more than her features. She was more than just her appearance. It was about her soul. It was about her pure heart. It was about her mind. It was about her passions. It was about the beauty of who she was and what she did. It wasn’t just about intimacy or appearance. It was about her moral beauty more than physical beauty. It was about exploring the depths that made her who she is. She’s the one you could explore the corners of your mind, the one you get lost with during deep and soul enriching talks. She was more than just her skin, she was the ocean. She was a Kalon – beauty that is more than skin deep. And only the ones who who look beyond skin deep will see her for who she really is.
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Jul 24, 2019
Jul 24, 2019 at 4:45 PM UTC
Prose: Kalon
they ask me nothing of myself, nothing of my mind, nothing of my values, nothing of my morals, but speaking of themselves is easy, my appearance may be part of who I am, but it does not define me
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May 18, 2019
May 18, 2019 at 8:11 AM UTC
surface value
You, you are a Thermodynamic Buoyant Force ******* like the single-minded Octopus that takes and takes Strong energy, mild energy Inhales the organically-grown Petals of all flowers, regardless Good intentions. that sure is nice What humility, Artificial Plastic Egotistical Manufactured Trademarked Birthed   Regurgitated and too thoughtfully acted by You. But I see it. You have not landed. The world needs your footprint but it does not need your self-indulged hunger. Be humble. Your success is not marked if You are not humble. Keep your tentacles in your depths and Be Poised Poised you seem to be and success is your process but Humility is my truth. We float on neighboring clouds of public service that have not the same hue. Take a step back. I see you mean No harm like a dinosaur with no arms Good intentions. Take a step back. You desire to envelop others yet You do so so mindlessly I see it. Let your brain rest from the throne. the world does not serve you It serves nothing and no one as We are all lucky. You say that you’re lucky For all to hear just to endear And that is the problem My dear, be poised. Publicize your life for documentation? No Take a step back. We need your love compassion independence ambition Real not fake. Transform this and Good intentions. The world is not yours You walk on its leaf and repeated, recycled identities Take a step back. The world is not yours. Cameron Bell, Copyright © 2019
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Mar 11, 2019
Mar 11, 2019 at 7:11 PM UTC
Good Intentions
Filing errands makes you drowsy and nautious. The tube dampens your senses. The highrises make you feel down. Your values are re-prioritised. You become the binmen’s ***** but all is not charred. You have the chance to remember before, and you grasp redemption as sand now sifts through your fingertips. The stars awaken the you beneath the superficial. The water nourishes your ignored thirstiness for passion.
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Jan 7, 2019
Jan 7, 2019 at 7:52 PM UTC
London's magic deficit
If you give me long enough I could paint a vivid portrait of myself with every blemish and pore behind a brush, and hush the voices that would criticize unsubscribe and dance it up over in wonderland with the sycophants put on my bedazzled pants let the local singles know I'm a dancer just a beating heart away From being another square upon a lattice a writhing mass of hair gel and cologne working up the ladder to fuckboi status Imma walk the line between a marble arch eclipsing the sun over an angel statue kneeling in prayer and a black leather boot clad bad *** with bad habits but he's so cool he doesn't care Look at him go all on his own with only a thousand or so, little paintings   that are equally as photo shopped or filtered just floating around waiting to see the show and letting other people know they liked it or not What a spectacle destined to leave us senseless and restless what a test of the patience to be a slave to the masses to see my juxtaposition against the rest of the best of us and think "I should go with clever with glasses." What a brutal twist of civilized life to have an AI made for driving my car so I can shimmy down and sneak another **** pic THROUGH SPACE, to some guy who works at taco bell's wife Laura something or something I'm so social What a medium, Exchanging ideas, and hunting body heat from out of the ether, to have the pleasing distortion of the speakers drowning out all the wearisome noise of our contortions "You gotta learn to love yourself" She says, and posts another photo buried somewhere under 60 layers of dog noses and rainbows, and angel wings Oh **** this isn't boyfriend material let me change some things - You don't ever need to change girl, there ain't anything, in this world That I wouldn't do, to be with you. And the Brief exchanges we had, didn't reveal any red flags, that I am willing to skip on *** over. So somewhere down the line, when the filters start to fade, we'll just kick that can down the road, and neither of us will change. And the picture's that we painted of our Love will degrade.
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Nov 28, 2018
Nov 28, 2018 at 12:29 AM UTC
Social Romance
If you give me long enough I could paint a vivid portrait of myself with every blemish and pore behind a brush, and hush the voices that would criticize unsubscribe and dance it up over in wonderland with the sycophants put on my bedazzled pants let the local singles know I'm a dancer just a beating heart away From being another square upon a lattice a writhing mass of hair gel and cologne working up the ladder to fuckboi status Imma walk the line between a marble arch eclipsing the sun over an angel statue kneeling in prayer and a black leather boot clad bad *** with bad habits but he's so cool he doesn't care Look at him go all on his own with only a thousand or so, little paintings   that are equally as photo shopped or filtered just floating around waiting to see the show and letting other people know they liked it or not What a spectacle destined to leave us senseless and restless what a test of the patience to be a slave to the masses to see my juxtaposition against the rest of the best of us and think "I should go with clever with glasses." What a brutal twist of civilized life to have an AI made for driving my car so I can shimmy down and sneak another **** pic THROUGH SPACE, to some guy who works at taco bell's wife Laura something or something I'm so social What a medium, Exchanging ideas, and hunting body heat from out of the ether, to have the pleasing distortion of the speakers drowning out all the wearisome noise of our contortions "You gotta learn to love yourself" She says, and posts another photo buried somewhere under 60 layers of dog noses and rainbows, and angel wings Oh **** this isn't boyfriend material let me change some things - You don't ever need to change girl, there ain't anything, in this world That I wouldn't do, to be with you. And the Brief exchanges we had, didn't reveal any red flags, that I am willing to skip on *** over. So somewhere down the line, when the filters start to fade, we'll just kick that can down the road, and neither of us will change. And the picture's that we painted of our Love will degrade.
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