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To sum it all up, taking a piece of word from his version of Psalms; “Twenty-four doesn’t sound that old,” so said the ugly *** Today I borrowed a homeless man a cigarette, his words were an ashtray – burned out like the filter; sounding ashy. You could start a fire with the knots inside his hair; eyes dimmed to the colour of ash, smoke curling off the edges of memory. Twenty-four years of breathing in what he could never let go, still clinging to the cracked seams of his face. His hands were black and oily, fingers stiff with factory life — each line a map of labour leading nowhere but back to rust. No kids, no wife. He mumbled verses from the Word, a sermon half-lost in static, holy words turned cryptic; by too many nights without rest. Still, he was a humble addict. He struck a matchstick against a box, wrapped in a cloth —the flame trembling in the wind, his jacket pocket rustling like paper filled with forgotten names. From living under locks; mostly the locks of others, he never found the key to his dreams. As the world counted his body, but not his breath; once shining through the seams - now just empty dreams. Steel teeth, a dusty cap, a gambling hand; a whiskey flask half full of forgetting. He drank like a man who mistook warmth for home; never regretting. Some nights he slept on steel — bench or bed, I couldn’t tell. But don’t assume he was sad; some men make peace with their ghosts —some paint their heaven with the smoke of hell. They said he’s just another one, a mumbling story in torn clothes, words scattered like receipts for a lifelong spent. A man treading the thin line toward his own end. But I still walk that street — the one where he talks to no one, and everyone avoids his eyes. They say not to mind the words he mumbles; but that man, the one they cross the road to miss — __that man is our uncle.__ And I still check up on him.
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Oct 30, 2025
Oct 30, 2025 at 6:01 AM UTC
Cigarettes, Ugly Bums & Psalms
To sum it all up, taking a piece of word from his version of Psalms; “Twenty-four doesn’t sound that old,” so said the ugly *** Today I borrowed a homeless man a cigarette, his words were an ashtray – burned out like the filter; sounding ashy. You could start a fire with the knots inside his hair; eyes dimmed to the colour of ash, smoke curling off the edges of memory. Twenty-four years of breathing in what he could never let go, still clinging to the cracked seams of his face. His hands were black and oily, fingers stiff with factory life — each line a map of labour leading nowhere but back to rust. No kids, no wife. He mumbled verses from the Word, a sermon half-lost in static, holy words turned cryptic; by too many nights without rest. Still, he was a humble addict. He struck a matchstick against a box, wrapped in a cloth —the flame trembling in the wind, his jacket pocket rustling like paper filled with forgotten names. From living under locks; mostly the locks of others, he never found the key to his dreams. As the world counted his body, but not his breath; once shining through the seams - now just empty dreams. Steel teeth, a dusty cap, a gambling hand; a whiskey flask half full of forgetting. He drank like a man who mistook warmth for home; never regretting. Some nights he slept on steel — bench or bed, I couldn’t tell. But don’t assume he was sad; some men make peace with their ghosts —some paint their heaven with the smoke of hell. They said he’s just another one, a mumbling story in torn clothes, words scattered like receipts for a lifelong spent. A man treading the thin line toward his own end. But I still walk that street — the one where he talks to no one, and everyone avoids his eyes. They say not to mind the words he mumbles; but that man, the one they cross the road to miss — __that man is our uncle.__ And I still check up on him.
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27/M/Zimbabwe
Oct 30, 2025
Oct 30, 2025 at 6:01 AM UTC
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