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The candles atop my cake sparkled tonight. They listened carefully as my thoughts and prayers traveled through their wicks and turned into a heated blaze. A burning thirst. My whispered silence was suffocating. The flames dwindling and flickering under the weight of it all. The stifling burden of a birthday wish, that will go ungranted. I piled my hopes and dreams onto those flickering flames. Shoving my desire and longing into their wax, forcing it down. I know it is bad luck to speak of your wishes after youve made them, but tonight I will. Deep within those candles and the smoke that followed, there was a whispered prayer. One for you. One for us. A wish for you to come back.
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Oct 22, 2025
Oct 22, 2025 at 11:24 PM UTC
My Birthday Wish.
The candles atop my cake sparkled tonight. They listened carefully as my thoughts and prayers traveled through their wicks and turned into a heated blaze. A burning thirst. My whispered silence was suffocating. The flames dwindling and flickering under the weight of it all. The stifling burden of a birthday wish, that will go ungranted. I piled my hopes and dreams onto those flickering flames. Shoving my desire and longing into their wax, forcing it down. I know it is bad luck to speak of your wishes after youve made them, but tonight I will. Deep within those candles and the smoke that followed, there was a whispered prayer. One for you. One for us. A wish for you to come back.
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Oct 22, 2025
Oct 22, 2025 at 11:24 PM UTC
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