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How beautiful is the rose That I watch and admire Unsightly thorns cling And I lose my desire Though thorns are my wrath It's for the rosebud that I lust My trivial sense of pride demands it, loudly proclaiming that I must. But maybe I have this tired feel That like a sloth, I must wait. In due time, I must reveal The tale of my sins that are sightless still Of greed, gluttony and envy That cloud my mind and will But all humans sin deep inside And all roses have seven thorns Those seven thorns and our sins do combine To create a devil's fearsome horns If all human sin and thorns are green, Does that make love and rosebuds red? If all humans truly are unsightly thorns Then we sin-filled humans can become blossoming roses too. Because as the crown of thorns rests upon his brow And as the wooden cross does rise We see our thorns and we see his blood We stare into his tired eyes We hear his declaration of forgiveness We hear his words; they speak no lies. Together we humans clasp our hands Together we humans hold our breaths, Quietly praying to that man So that our sins may truly rest.
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Oct 22, 2025
Oct 22, 2025 at 3:06 PM UTC
Thorns // Biblical Ver.
How beautiful is the rose That I watch and admire Unsightly thorns cling And I lose my desire Though thorns are my wrath It's for the rosebud that I lust My trivial sense of pride demands it, loudly proclaiming that I must. But maybe I have this tired feel That like a sloth, I must wait. In due time, I must reveal The tale of my sins that are sightless still Of greed, gluttony and envy That cloud my mind and will But all humans sin deep inside And all roses have seven thorns Those seven thorns and our sins do combine To create a devil's fearsome horns If all human sin and thorns are green, Does that make love and rosebuds red? If all humans truly are unsightly thorns Then we sin-filled humans can become blossoming roses too. Because as the crown of thorns rests upon his brow And as the wooden cross does rise We see our thorns and we see his blood We stare into his tired eyes We hear his declaration of forgiveness We hear his words; they speak no lies. Together we humans clasp our hands Together we humans hold our breaths, Quietly praying to that man So that our sins may truly rest.
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Oct 22, 2025
Oct 22, 2025 at 3:06 PM UTC
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