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i received some help (you know who you are) to make this piece better. and i think it worked. it flows better. so thank you. and i think just a few final touches and it's done? before; i dont know how to love you or trust you after ive been hurt.. but i wasn't hurt by you. i was hurt by someone who i loved and trusted. and i dont know how to do it again after i was betrayed like that. so easily -- and they didn't look back. i just don't want to get hurt again. i don't think i could handle it. after; i dont know how to love you or trust you after ive been hurt.. i was hurt by someone who i loved and trusted. and i dont know how to do it again after i was betrayed so easily.. i just don't want to get hurt again. i don't think i could handle it this time. i like this version more.
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Oct 6, 2025
Oct 6, 2025 at 10:39 AM UTC
006 / part four
i received some help (you know who you are) to make this piece better. and i think it worked. it flows better. so thank you. and i think just a few final touches and it's done? before; i dont know how to love you or trust you after ive been hurt.. but i wasn't hurt by you. i was hurt by someone who i loved and trusted. and i dont know how to do it again after i was betrayed like that. so easily -- and they didn't look back. i just don't want to get hurt again. i don't think i could handle it. after; i dont know how to love you or trust you after ive been hurt.. i was hurt by someone who i loved and trusted. and i dont know how to do it again after i was betrayed so easily.. i just don't want to get hurt again. i don't think i could handle it this time. i like this version more.
noumena
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Oct 6, 2025
Oct 6, 2025 at 10:39 AM UTC
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