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My Feelings like a dam just waiting to break My Thoughts like a swirl just waiting to spiral I either feel too much or think too much Others’ feelings like a river flowing Others’ thoughts like a soft blow It’s balanced they don’t feel too much or too little they don’t think too much or too little just… enough I feel too much I think too much I’m too much Or is the world too little? “You’re too sensitive” Maybe I just feel deeply Is that a curse? A gift? Both? Like a double edged sword making me weak and strong Emotions and thoughts two things that make us human two things that need to be balanced, yin and yang That balance harder to find than a needle buried deep in a straw bale Who is in control? Who is right? Me? My thoughts? My feelings? Everything and nothing? Maybe I’m the dam and the river Maybe I’m the swirl and the soft blow And maybe nobody has found the needle
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Sep 9, 2025
Sep 9, 2025 at 5:35 PM UTC
Emotions and thoughts
My Feelings like a dam just waiting to break My Thoughts like a swirl just waiting to spiral I either feel too much or think too much Others’ feelings like a river flowing Others’ thoughts like a soft blow It’s balanced they don’t feel too much or too little they don’t think too much or too little just… enough I feel too much I think too much I’m too much Or is the world too little? “You’re too sensitive” Maybe I just feel deeply Is that a curse? A gift? Both? Like a double edged sword making me weak and strong Emotions and thoughts two things that make us human two things that need to be balanced, yin and yang That balance harder to find than a needle buried deep in a straw bale Who is in control? Who is right? Me? My thoughts? My feelings? Everything and nothing? Maybe I’m the dam and the river Maybe I’m the swirl and the soft blow And maybe nobody has found the needle
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Sep 9, 2025
Sep 9, 2025 at 5:35 PM UTC
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