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Suddenly, the 502s were back those unexpected disconnects that make posting whack and my nerves a wreck Like blank spots in time that made me backtrack unable to use rhymes I felt trapped and highjacked Did the server choke on a bone? Was 5G stalling me, wordless and postponed? Did the firewall collapse, did DNS lapse? Was it my laptop, was it my phone? People watched me, on the metro, as I frowned and moaned at my useless iPhone. The issues seemed flagrant, I was becoming impatient Was I some kind of nut? I was showing emotion. We don’t DO that in Paris - have public implosions. Did it happen to you? Or was I one of a few. What were the chances that it only happened to poets in France? . . Song for this: Alone Again (Naturally) by Gilbert O'Sullivan La Vie en Rose by Allison Adams Tucker
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Aug 23, 2025
Aug 23, 2025 at 11:00 AM UTC
They were back
Suddenly, the 502s were back those unexpected disconnects that make posting whack and my nerves a wreck Like blank spots in time that made me backtrack unable to use rhymes I felt trapped and highjacked Did the server choke on a bone? Was 5G stalling me, wordless and postponed? Did the firewall collapse, did DNS lapse? Was it my laptop, was it my phone? People watched me, on the metro, as I frowned and moaned at my useless iPhone. The issues seemed flagrant, I was becoming impatient Was I some kind of nut? I was showing emotion. We don’t DO that in Paris - have public implosions. Did it happen to you? Or was I one of a few. What were the chances that it only happened to poets in France? . . Song for this: Alone Again (Naturally) by Gilbert O'Sullivan La Vie en Rose by Allison Adams Tucker
BLT Merriam Webster word of the day challenge 08/23/25: flagrant = obvious, conspicuously bad—too bad to ignore.
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22/F/France
Aug 23, 2025
Aug 23, 2025 at 11:00 AM UTC
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