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You brandish your name like a sacred crest, “Kirat,” you echo, with thunder in chest Yet the echoes betray your ancestral breath, Winds of the north whisper Tibetan depth. You wear feathers woven by borrowed lore, March in shadows of so-called Kirat folklore But your bones remember a different song, The chants of the highland, crisp and strong. Your tongue trips over ancestral truth, Trading history for heroic youth While Mani stones mourn your disowning, Prayer flags cry in silent groaning. Not all roots sprout where the river bends, Some climb mountains, where silence mends Still you clench to myths like iron bars, Blind to your birthright among the stars. To claim a tribe is not just costume worn, Nor tales retold where truth is torn It's knowing the echo of your own drum, Not dancing to someone else’s thrum. Awake, O wanderer of mistaken trail Break the glass of pride grown stale. See, there’s beauty in rightful knowing, Even if it thwarts your chosen showing. Dhal Jirel Ravi Jiri, Dolakha 3 August, 2025
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Aug 3, 2025
Aug 3, 2025 at 5:57 AM UTC
To the Blind Believers
You brandish your name like a sacred crest, “Kirat,” you echo, with thunder in chest Yet the echoes betray your ancestral breath, Winds of the north whisper Tibetan depth. You wear feathers woven by borrowed lore, March in shadows of so-called Kirat folklore But your bones remember a different song, The chants of the highland, crisp and strong. Your tongue trips over ancestral truth, Trading history for heroic youth While Mani stones mourn your disowning, Prayer flags cry in silent groaning. Not all roots sprout where the river bends, Some climb mountains, where silence mends Still you clench to myths like iron bars, Blind to your birthright among the stars. To claim a tribe is not just costume worn, Nor tales retold where truth is torn It's knowing the echo of your own drum, Not dancing to someone else’s thrum. Awake, O wanderer of mistaken trail Break the glass of pride grown stale. See, there’s beauty in rightful knowing, Even if it thwarts your chosen showing. Dhal Jirel Ravi Jiri, Dolakha 3 August, 2025
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Aug 3, 2025 at 5:57 AM UTC
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