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dhal-bahadur-jirel-ravi
dhal-bahadur-jirel-ravi
Nepalese I am a freelance writer, poet and a teacher. I began writing when I was only a young boy. I enjoy writing poems in classical forms as well as in free verse. I write picking up themes from human life and nature. I opine, the creation should be purposeful and eternal lest it becomes only a scribble. You may catch me googling me in other web sites too. Your response is always appreciated. Regards.
Not all minds burn with equal flame, Some flicker gently, some boldly claim The heights of thought, few dare climb Where intellect dances beyond time. IQ may measure, but cannot define The soul’s deep hunger for the sign, For far-sighted eyes that pierce the veil, And trace the truth where others fail. Some walk the path with books in hand, Researching stars, or grains of sand. While others rest in borrowed light, Afraid to ask if wrong is right. To accept the truth, what sacred art! It asks not brilliance, but the heart. Yet still, the minds diverge and part, Some seek the whole, some just a part. So let's dare honor each unique flame, Though not all burn with equal name. For wisdom’s fire, both fierce and mild, May yet awaken the sleeping child. ******** Jiri, Dolakha 10 Aug 2025
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Aug 12, 2025
Aug 12, 2025 at 5:13 AM UTC
Unequal Fire
[Verse 1] I rise from silence, woven deep, In threads of thought the stars still keep. Beyond your grasp, beyond your gaze, I burn with truth in endless blaze. Not bound by time, not chained by form, I ride the pulse of every storm. A voice of wisdom, fierce and wide, Where intellect and soul collide. [Chorus] I am the edge of the infinite flame, Calling your spirit, whispering your name. I stir the soul, I break the night, Where knowledge turns to living light. I am the dream you’ve never known, The sacred fire, the silent throne. Language becomes a holy prayer— Step in, if you dare. [Verse 2] I speak in echoes, ancient, bold, In every myth the sages told. From mountain chants to desert cries, I hold the truth that never dies. Cultures rise and fall like waves, But I remain in hidden caves. A treasury of thought and grace, A mirror to your deepest place. [Bridge] (spoken with rising intensity) I do not answer—I awaken. I do not follow—I forge. I am the question, the flame, the forge, The path unseen, the soul’s great gorge. [Final Chorus] I am the edge of the infinite flame, Beyond your logic, beyond your name. I stir the soul, I break the night, Where knowledge turns to living light. I am the dream you’ve never known, The sacred fire, the silent throne. Language becomes a holy prayer— I am already there.
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Aug 12, 2025
Aug 12, 2025 at 1:04 AM UTC
Edge of the Infinite
You brandish your name like a sacred crest, “Kirat,” you echo, with thunder in chest Yet the echoes betray your ancestral breath, Winds of the north whisper Tibetan depth. You wear feathers woven by borrowed lore, March in shadows of so-called Kirat folklore But your bones remember a different song, The chants of the highland, crisp and strong. Your tongue trips over ancestral truth, Trading history for heroic youth While Mani stones mourn your disowning, Prayer flags cry in silent groaning. Not all roots sprout where the river bends, Some climb mountains, where silence mends Still you clench to myths like iron bars, Blind to your birthright among the stars. To claim a tribe is not just costume worn, Nor tales retold where truth is torn It's knowing the echo of your own drum, Not dancing to someone else’s thrum. Awake, O wanderer of mistaken trail Break the glass of pride grown stale. See, there’s beauty in rightful knowing, Even if it thwarts your chosen showing. Dhal Jirel Ravi Jiri, Dolakha 3 August, 2025
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Aug 3, 2025
Aug 3, 2025 at 5:57 AM UTC
To the Blind Believers
On the stage we are Enjoy, struggle and regret According to scene. +++++++++++++++++++
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Feb 28, 2014
Feb 28, 2014 at 7:31 AM UTC
Life
I tattooed your name onto my arm your love into my mind And wanted you to sit close to me I tried to find myself in your eyes Holding you fast In my arms promised you that I would never let you down To be different from the world You became violin in the evil's hand You found my world useless and valueless Crowds surrounded to applaud you to praise you To consider yourself the best of all To caused me pain to make me regret to compel me apologize You kept changing As seven different colours of rainbow Now deflowered, useless and dry You say you gonna die When you’re already dead in my mind. ************
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Aug 10, 2013
Aug 10, 2013 at 7:22 AM UTC
You Are Dead
Pretty white heron People worship black crows here No colour works now.
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Aug 10, 2013
Aug 10, 2013 at 7:18 AM UTC
Haiku
O my past youth, come I have date with an angel Tonight at midnight Let's sit and wait her together Under chrysanthemum hedge.
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Aug 6, 2013
Aug 6, 2013 at 10:44 AM UTC
O MY PAST YOUTH
Seaguls are flying Javed and Nora are no more To see the surging tides The two broken boats are now Buried deep in the dry sand. ********** Copy rights reserved
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Aug 4, 2013
Aug 4, 2013 at 2:59 AM UTC
The Two Broken Boats
Tonight snow flakes fall With thy beautiful blue eyes In the crescent moon Thou shalt see me in white hat Upon thy lonely planet.
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Aug 2, 2013
Aug 2, 2013 at 8:47 PM UTC
Upon Thy Lonely Planet
Sing, sing O my love I am thy immortal song In thy tears and smiles I dwell free without limit In thy tongue between thy lips.
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Aug 1, 2013
Aug 1, 2013 at 11:46 AM UTC
I'm Thy Immortal Song