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__A pistol tucked inside my heart__— memories of old dreams echo like bullet wounds. Freedom comes, quietly, when I finally let myself be known to myself. Lips are like public transport; they carry heavy loads: _sometimes love, sometimes doubt._ But the private lifts? Those are the words we whisper to ourselves when we’re trying to lift ourselves up, above our own doubts. __What loads are you carrying?__ Will your transport make...or break someone? Because belief in your own worth is such a heavy load. __And no__— it’s not something you should carry alone. The weight of any load feels lighter when the ones you love—and who love you back— don’t just stand beside you; they help you carry what you were never meant to bear alone.
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Jun 23, 2025
Jun 23, 2025 at 4:23 AM UTC
Heavy Loads, Quiet Freedoms
__A pistol tucked inside my heart__— memories of old dreams echo like bullet wounds. Freedom comes, quietly, when I finally let myself be known to myself. Lips are like public transport; they carry heavy loads: _sometimes love, sometimes doubt._ But the private lifts? Those are the words we whisper to ourselves when we’re trying to lift ourselves up, above our own doubts. __What loads are you carrying?__ Will your transport make...or break someone? Because belief in your own worth is such a heavy load. __And no__— it’s not something you should carry alone. The weight of any load feels lighter when the ones you love—and who love you back— don’t just stand beside you; they help you carry what you were never meant to bear alone.
OddOdysseyPoet
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27/M/Zimbabwe
Jun 23, 2025
Jun 23, 2025 at 4:23 AM UTC
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