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The summit looked so far away We started walking anyway Sometimes we spoke Laughing and teasing Sometimes we fell silent Looking and listening Sometimes we needed a brief rest sip of cool water granola snack pulled from a pack Then back to the hike Walking and walking As the trail ascended Navigating rocks and sand One step and then another Until we looked up and realized We made it to the summit The place where we started looked so far away from the top where we now stood Thrilled with ourselves and the view Happy to have made it there, together The land never looked so alive the sky, so blue As it did from that summit view. © 2025 SincerelyJoanWrites. All rights reserved.
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Apr 14, 2025
Apr 14, 2025 at 9:33 PM UTC
Not So Far
The summit looked so far away We started walking anyway Sometimes we spoke Laughing and teasing Sometimes we fell silent Looking and listening Sometimes we needed a brief rest sip of cool water granola snack pulled from a pack Then back to the hike Walking and walking As the trail ascended Navigating rocks and sand One step and then another Until we looked up and realized We made it to the summit The place where we started looked so far away from the top where we now stood Thrilled with ourselves and the view Happy to have made it there, together The land never looked so alive the sky, so blue As it did from that summit view. © 2025 SincerelyJoanWrites. All rights reserved.
This poem narrates my experience walking with family to the summit at Airport Mesa in beautiful Sedona, AZ.
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43/F/Minnesota, USA
Apr 14, 2025
Apr 14, 2025 at 9:33 PM UTC
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