I told someone:
I believe people
should write
from their gut—
and maybe their
gut was an atom.
Then I laughed,
while my dog
was laying on my chest,
and went on
with more comments.
An hour or so later,
while watching a show
with my girl,
sharing my screen,
I decided to check on AP.
"That guy who was
a **** to you
on your awesome poem
gave you a 1-star
on your comment."
I read my comment again,
looked at the 1-star review,
and we laughed
even harder
than I did by myself
an hour before.
My dog spun around—
his *** turned to me
as he decided
enough was enough
and the world
had done him
no good deeds today,
and that warranted
sleep by my socks
much like guts
that are the size of atoms.
After that,
we continued to watch:
Six Feet Under.
Apr 9, 2025
Apr 9, 2025 at 6:26 PM UTC
I told someone:
I believe people
should write
from their gut—
and maybe their
gut was an atom.
Then I laughed,
while my dog
was laying on my chest,
and went on
with more comments.
An hour or so later,
while watching a show
with my girl,
sharing my screen,
I decided to check on AP.
"That guy who was
a **** to you
on your awesome poem
gave you a 1-star
on your comment."
I read my comment again,
looked at the 1-star review,
and we laughed
even harder
than I did by myself
an hour before.
My dog spun around—
his *** turned to me
as he decided
enough was enough
and the world
had done him
no good deeds today,
and that warranted
sleep by my socks
much like guts
that are the size of atoms.
After that,
we continued to watch:
Six Feet Under.
