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There is a mad place inside some certain Cold lane where windows creak with Each gentle whisper. Surely some revelation is at hand, Surely someone is to come. But this mad place, oh this mad place. It beats and it beats, night and day And doesn’t stop to sit to mourn or Feel, this mad place, oh but Surely some revelation is at hand, Surely one might someday let it out. In times of despair, one thinks of Old age, one thinks of holding hands And one thinks of committing a sin, But this mad place, it never stops To dream, da dum, da dum, indeed, It beats and it beats! One day, maybe, it will find a way To figure it out, one day, or perhaps, I shall grow a wing, or least find a way to live with it, But seldom, will it stop? When will it stop? When Will it make sense to stop? Surely there must be something, Some shade under a tree Or some fine stone to sit on. Oh but this mad place, this mad place, this restless bird, When would it drop the shiny pebble from its hands? Yes, there are times when it lets out a sigh, Mostly out of desperation. But When the night passes, it makes up lies It doesn’t look back to see what it said. Does it even means what it says? Does it even bother to say what it means? This mad place, this uncaged cage, What does it seem to wait for? Who is to come? What is to come? This mad place, this mad place, When the words fly like out of season Birds, when it squeaks like winter winds, Maybe it will think to stop, or ask, Surely someone is to come. Surely some revelation is at hand!
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Mar 22, 2025
Mar 22, 2025 at 6:14 AM UTC
A mad place
There is a mad place inside some certain Cold lane where windows creak with Each gentle whisper. Surely some revelation is at hand, Surely someone is to come. But this mad place, oh this mad place. It beats and it beats, night and day And doesn’t stop to sit to mourn or Feel, this mad place, oh but Surely some revelation is at hand, Surely one might someday let it out. In times of despair, one thinks of Old age, one thinks of holding hands And one thinks of committing a sin, But this mad place, it never stops To dream, da dum, da dum, indeed, It beats and it beats! One day, maybe, it will find a way To figure it out, one day, or perhaps, I shall grow a wing, or least find a way to live with it, But seldom, will it stop? When will it stop? When Will it make sense to stop? Surely there must be something, Some shade under a tree Or some fine stone to sit on. Oh but this mad place, this mad place, this restless bird, When would it drop the shiny pebble from its hands? Yes, there are times when it lets out a sigh, Mostly out of desperation. But When the night passes, it makes up lies It doesn’t look back to see what it said. Does it even means what it says? Does it even bother to say what it means? This mad place, this uncaged cage, What does it seem to wait for? Who is to come? What is to come? This mad place, this mad place, When the words fly like out of season Birds, when it squeaks like winter winds, Maybe it will think to stop, or ask, Surely someone is to come. Surely some revelation is at hand!
The poem explores an unrelenting, restless inner turmoil—a "mad place" that beats ceaselessly, yearning for revelation yet refusing to pause or find peace. It questions whether meaning, resolution, or an end to its madness will ever come, lingering in uncertainty and expectation.
fahadShah
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23/M/India
Mar 22, 2025
Mar 22, 2025 at 6:14 AM UTC
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