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I have this overwhelming feeling A loneliness I can’t escape Long days, with thoughts of you I’m falling in love with you again I don’t know if you will ever know How it is to have someone forever in your thoughts You consume my existence As my heart cries out, hoping you will hear Morning hues, a sunrise that brings me light Remind me of you, your palette of choice Your brushstrokes upon the canvas Tells the tale of your heart Can you feel, The warmth of my heart? How it beats for you? The longing that is deeply engraved upon it? I am so very lonely Yet my feelings remain unchanged An overflowing cup that never empties As I fall in love with you, again, every day anew The sun sets, the night sky Your darkened palette Brushstrokes painted by the pale moonlight As the end grows near for the long day You are So Far Away My feelings are eternal, never letting go As I wake every morning to your colors As I retire every evening to darkened skies My heart yearns for thee Unchanged feelings Can you feel my love across this distance? The quantum entanglement of our souls? I have fallen in love with you, every day A year of longing Ten months of love-filled thoughts So far away, but always in my heart
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Jan 23, 2025
Jan 23, 2025 at 12:58 AM UTC
So Far Away (2024)
I have this overwhelming feeling A loneliness I can’t escape Long days, with thoughts of you I’m falling in love with you again I don’t know if you will ever know How it is to have someone forever in your thoughts You consume my existence As my heart cries out, hoping you will hear Morning hues, a sunrise that brings me light Remind me of you, your palette of choice Your brushstrokes upon the canvas Tells the tale of your heart Can you feel, The warmth of my heart? How it beats for you? The longing that is deeply engraved upon it? I am so very lonely Yet my feelings remain unchanged An overflowing cup that never empties As I fall in love with you, again, every day anew The sun sets, the night sky Your darkened palette Brushstrokes painted by the pale moonlight As the end grows near for the long day You are So Far Away My feelings are eternal, never letting go As I wake every morning to your colors As I retire every evening to darkened skies My heart yearns for thee Unchanged feelings Can you feel my love across this distance? The quantum entanglement of our souls? I have fallen in love with you, every day A year of longing Ten months of love-filled thoughts So far away, but always in my heart
I wrote this during the holidays, being away from the one I love. Trying to cope with the loneliness, the longing, and yearning of my heart. Love sometimes can consume you, and in the silence of the distance, sometimes clarity eludes you.
Liujiawen2024
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Jan 23, 2025
Jan 23, 2025 at 12:58 AM UTC
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