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"Hey there, Mr.Polished ! Look I know you' re all modest and don' t like the extra attention. I' m just stopping by to pay homage." "Acknowlegded. Thanks." "I haven' t said anything yet. How' ve my compliments already been abolished ?? Can you at least hear them out please... I mean they' re all honest." "Look I don' t wanna come off as snobbish I' m just not interested. I don' t really want it." "Naaah man...something' s wrong. That was a typical response but something about it feels uncommon. Are you okay ? You don' t seem so...solid." "I' m cool." "And I' m Fool. Tone...c' mon man. I' m just trying to provide some solace. I' ve learned how important support is ...cause YOU taught it. Honesty too. And you just lied and I caught it. I' m not asking you to be flawless man. Just be honest. Just be honest. Whatever it is you' re thinking I wanna know what that thought is." "You first." "Fine. You seem...hollow. Like...you' re out of thrill and you just had a really tough pill to swallow." "Hmm. Almost." "What' re you carrying man ? What' s the cargo ? Are you using again ? Emptying more wine bottles ?" "No. No empty bottles." "Then why do you look like this ?" "Look like what ? A role model ?" "Funny.   More like the "old" model. Don' t treat me like I need goggles. I can see just fine and I can read too...YOU... just like a novel. And what I' ve read so far... is that there may be a problem. And if YOU have problems... then I have problems. So I' d appreciate it if you' d help me solve em. Start talking." "I' m not exactly...star-struck when I look in the mirror. It has nothing to do with looks. I think it' s fear." "Fear ?? Do know what you made it through that past year ?? And you sittin here talkin to me about "fear" ??" "I' m glad I made myself clear." "Toni ? YOU...scared ??" ***** Yes."
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Jul 29, 2024
Jul 29, 2024 at 4:14 AM UTC
Messages From The Mirror
"Hey there, Mr.Polished ! Look I know you' re all modest and don' t like the extra attention. I' m just stopping by to pay homage." "Acknowlegded. Thanks." "I haven' t said anything yet. How' ve my compliments already been abolished ?? Can you at least hear them out please... I mean they' re all honest." "Look I don' t wanna come off as snobbish I' m just not interested. I don' t really want it." "Naaah man...something' s wrong. That was a typical response but something about it feels uncommon. Are you okay ? You don' t seem so...solid." "I' m cool." "And I' m Fool. Tone...c' mon man. I' m just trying to provide some solace. I' ve learned how important support is ...cause YOU taught it. Honesty too. And you just lied and I caught it. I' m not asking you to be flawless man. Just be honest. Just be honest. Whatever it is you' re thinking I wanna know what that thought is." "You first." "Fine. You seem...hollow. Like...you' re out of thrill and you just had a really tough pill to swallow." "Hmm. Almost." "What' re you carrying man ? What' s the cargo ? Are you using again ? Emptying more wine bottles ?" "No. No empty bottles." "Then why do you look like this ?" "Look like what ? A role model ?" "Funny.   More like the "old" model. Don' t treat me like I need goggles. I can see just fine and I can read too...YOU... just like a novel. And what I' ve read so far... is that there may be a problem. And if YOU have problems... then I have problems. So I' d appreciate it if you' d help me solve em. Start talking." "I' m not exactly...star-struck when I look in the mirror. It has nothing to do with looks. I think it' s fear." "Fear ?? Do know what you made it through that past year ?? And you sittin here talkin to me about "fear" ??" "I' m glad I made myself clear." "Toni ? YOU...scared ??" ***** Yes."
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Jul 29, 2024
Jul 29, 2024 at 4:14 AM UTC
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