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Having caused much pain And upset to one I love I looked long and hard At me to find the root Of my failing, I cut deep and discarded My ego my pride And a host of other bad Habits that accrued Across the years, And deep within me I found an eight year old Little boy with arms About his knees, Head down, His tear streaked face Framing a mouth that Screamed silently in pain, Heartbreak and Loneliness, So I looked within That visceral version of me, Cutting deeper than before, And right at his heart I found a budded rose, At first glance It was perfect, But closer view showed Dessication discolour And paper thin petals, But even as I watched Your hand appeared, Caressed the child Then watered his Withered heart, And in an instant that bud Regained its lustre And its carmine hue, The petals spread to glorious flower, The silent screaming paused In wonder then delight, I realise now there Was no fault in me nor My heart or view I just needed watering With love From you
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Dec 24, 2023
Dec 24, 2023 at 2:57 AM UTC
Rosebud
Having caused much pain And upset to one I love I looked long and hard At me to find the root Of my failing, I cut deep and discarded My ego my pride And a host of other bad Habits that accrued Across the years, And deep within me I found an eight year old Little boy with arms About his knees, Head down, His tear streaked face Framing a mouth that Screamed silently in pain, Heartbreak and Loneliness, So I looked within That visceral version of me, Cutting deeper than before, And right at his heart I found a budded rose, At first glance It was perfect, But closer view showed Dessication discolour And paper thin petals, But even as I watched Your hand appeared, Caressed the child Then watered his Withered heart, And in an instant that bud Regained its lustre And its carmine hue, The petals spread to glorious flower, The silent screaming paused In wonder then delight, I realise now there Was no fault in me nor My heart or view I just needed watering With love From you
Sometimes being loved is enough to heal even the deepest wound
jamesb
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58/M/London
Dec 24, 2023
Dec 24, 2023 at 2:57 AM UTC
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