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You. You are parting to the heavens, Leaving thoughts embedded Into my mind. How unkind, That death must welcome you, To hold you before I do. This cannot be true. How alive I felt. Your smile, contagious, And how outrageous That you're being taken. As you now awaken in a land of clouds. But now, My heart is aching, Thoughts are racing, I miss you now. I miss us two. My lips, Quivering At a thought only one can dread. 'You are dead'. As I lay Sitting in pain, Grieving, By your bed.
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Oct 26, 2023
Oct 26, 2023 at 3:09 PM UTC
Stages I
You. You are parting to the heavens, Leaving thoughts embedded Into my mind. How unkind, That death must welcome you, To hold you before I do. This cannot be true. How alive I felt. Your smile, contagious, And how outrageous That you're being taken. As you now awaken in a land of clouds. But now, My heart is aching, Thoughts are racing, I miss you now. I miss us two. My lips, Quivering At a thought only one can dread. 'You are dead'. As I lay Sitting in pain, Grieving, By your bed.
This poem shows the first stages of denial in a person, from when they are about to die to when they pass away. This poem is one of many parts, please enjoy it!
Chelsquig23
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23/F/Waterford
Oct 26, 2023
Oct 26, 2023 at 3:09 PM UTC
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