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Oh! God knows how much I enjoy being in a train The first experience is always the best When the train is packed and you could observe other people's behaviour closely The pitchy sound of the train tyres colliding with the railway Trading smiles with strangers The sulking sound of a baby And in that moment you could feel everything that you've been longing for As if your mind is finally free from being tormented.
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Sep 29, 2013
Sep 29, 2013 at 11:26 AM UTC
Train
Oh! God knows how much I enjoy being in a train The first experience is always the best When the train is packed and you could observe other people's behaviour closely The pitchy sound of the train tyres colliding with the railway Trading smiles with strangers The sulking sound of a baby And in that moment you could feel everything that you've been longing for As if your mind is finally free from being tormented.
dreadfulmind
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Malaysian
Sep 29, 2013
Sep 29, 2013 at 11:26 AM UTC
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