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People - so many bodies… Some seem to engage for but a moment, of course, before bustling past on hot sidewalks, with varied smidgens of mind and heart; collections of vibrating chemistry, moving to specific oscillations. How to make sense of it all? We can be drawn to warm embers, avoid icy slaps on our cheeks reddening. Grey shapes pass us by, hardly registering a blip - are they nothing more than the flotsam of flailing limbs echoing our own caustic needs and wants pending? Yet we all want much the same things in life: to be noticed with kindness by the benign, safe from the razor-blade elements, find our slot in life that counts, and leave something good for posterity, if it comes… For dots of humanity of which we are a part, in some fashion or another, keep floating giddily past us… Are they up for what will come with stoic resistance, or neglect? Do they expect some dystopia and the terrors of a dark night? Ask the fretting little children, who can’t sleep for their fright! They too need a river of peace ~ the Promise to be fulfilled made by One wiser than all else… ~~
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Mar 16, 2023
Mar 16, 2023 at 7:58 PM UTC
The Promise
People - so many bodies… Some seem to engage for but a moment, of course, before bustling past on hot sidewalks, with varied smidgens of mind and heart; collections of vibrating chemistry, moving to specific oscillations. How to make sense of it all? We can be drawn to warm embers, avoid icy slaps on our cheeks reddening. Grey shapes pass us by, hardly registering a blip - are they nothing more than the flotsam of flailing limbs echoing our own caustic needs and wants pending? Yet we all want much the same things in life: to be noticed with kindness by the benign, safe from the razor-blade elements, find our slot in life that counts, and leave something good for posterity, if it comes… For dots of humanity of which we are a part, in some fashion or another, keep floating giddily past us… Are they up for what will come with stoic resistance, or neglect? Do they expect some dystopia and the terrors of a dark night? Ask the fretting little children, who can’t sleep for their fright! They too need a river of peace ~ the Promise to be fulfilled made by One wiser than all else… ~~
ponderings in moments of existential fatigue... Isaiah 48:18 is the promised peace referred to, echoed by John 16:33. We need never feel too alone for arguably the greatest man who ever lived, knew how to ascend above all and 'conquer' and freely wishes to give us this peace.
eleanor-prince
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Mar 16, 2023
Mar 16, 2023 at 7:58 PM UTC
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