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Do you know what's most heart breaking about growing up? When the sand castles built in your youth are eroded by the waves of time When the card tower built on childish whimsical fantasy tumbles down when dealt the hand of reality Then the world turns from the magical into the mundane The wonder is lost quickly as the transient towers of naivety break What else can it do but break? It's foundations were steeled by a faith in an illusion so strong it became concrete When the faith is challenged and it is lost, the illusion becomes realized and the tower falls Just like the sunset of yesterday, the miracle of adolescence becomes a beautiful memory Lost quickly to the tides of time and is gifted just once Never to be experienced again but whose evanescent beauty is indelibly burned into the heart A reverie once simply just life This road of life is one way The only direction is forwards We're limited to looking back through the glass of the present Do you now what's most heartbreaking about growing up? It's when you've realized what you've lost when you've already lost it
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Dec 5, 2021
Dec 5, 2021 at 11:00 PM UTC
nostalgia of childhood
Do you know what's most heart breaking about growing up? When the sand castles built in your youth are eroded by the waves of time When the card tower built on childish whimsical fantasy tumbles down when dealt the hand of reality Then the world turns from the magical into the mundane The wonder is lost quickly as the transient towers of naivety break What else can it do but break? It's foundations were steeled by a faith in an illusion so strong it became concrete When the faith is challenged and it is lost, the illusion becomes realized and the tower falls Just like the sunset of yesterday, the miracle of adolescence becomes a beautiful memory Lost quickly to the tides of time and is gifted just once Never to be experienced again but whose evanescent beauty is indelibly burned into the heart A reverie once simply just life This road of life is one way The only direction is forwards We're limited to looking back through the glass of the present Do you now what's most heartbreaking about growing up? It's when you've realized what you've lost when you've already lost it
I was trying to make a poem to accompany the line about sand castles that I thought of randomly. Who knew I would crank out such a sad poem?
ramenoodle
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Dec 5, 2021
Dec 5, 2021 at 11:00 PM UTC
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