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They tell me just to go with the flow, But that's easier said than done when you are swimming against the current, They tell me that when you are in a body of water, Take one deep breath and you'll float on the surface with ease, About how gentle it would be, like going to sleep, So I think about how easy that would be, If I could just inhale once and float on a sea of my problems, But then I remember how if you are under a body of water, And you take a deep breath, You will immediately flood your lung, Starving your body of oxygen and suffocating, Dying this way is like going to sleep, apparently, As I am typing this, I contemplate how thin the line is in this case, Between drowning and floating.
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Jun 21, 2021
Jun 21, 2021 at 3:07 PM UTC
They Tell Me
They tell me just to go with the flow, But that's easier said than done when you are swimming against the current, They tell me that when you are in a body of water, Take one deep breath and you'll float on the surface with ease, About how gentle it would be, like going to sleep, So I think about how easy that would be, If I could just inhale once and float on a sea of my problems, But then I remember how if you are under a body of water, And you take a deep breath, You will immediately flood your lung, Starving your body of oxygen and suffocating, Dying this way is like going to sleep, apparently, As I am typing this, I contemplate how thin the line is in this case, Between drowning and floating.
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17/Two-Spirit/my brain, where else
Jun 21, 2021
Jun 21, 2021 at 3:07 PM UTC
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