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They once asked If we looked forward To trainings Well I know I do On top of the Cold regularity That calms On top of the countless Hours endured Under the sun Like statues There is one thing I look forward To That is meeting The lot of You Twice A week Two blessings In five days Of chaos The seventh batch  The remaining five Somehow During those two Or three Hours of training You guys somehow Manage to take All That weight Away Introducing me To new sound worlds Teaching me How to dance Or just watching And listening  To your amusing Conversations On all sorts of things So Open Carefree Not Judgmental No comparisons And always Each time Each session You'll never fail To pull out A genuine Smile Or Laugh From deep inside This Abyss One that cannot Be contained Or restrained Or just simply Watching the Plain Innocence With all your kiddish Knick-knacks Just for a little while It banishes All that Complexity And through All the gruelling camps All the scoldings All the punishments The yelling The pain The standing We still stuck through You guys  May not know How much it means To me To have such a platoon Keeping me going Through the tough times When I really want  To give up And give in But just seeing  The five of us Huddled together In the smallest Circle Making small laughs Small jokes The complaints The whining It somehow makes things Feel Right Pulling up that Swinging end Of the graph Into a positive Curve At the end Of the day
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Aug 5, 2013
Aug 5, 2013 at 11:45 AM UTC
The upward-ending tip of a negative-curving graph
They once asked If we looked forward To trainings Well I know I do On top of the Cold regularity That calms On top of the countless Hours endured Under the sun Like statues There is one thing I look forward To That is meeting The lot of You Twice A week Two blessings In five days Of chaos The seventh batch  The remaining five Somehow During those two Or three Hours of training You guys somehow Manage to take All That weight Away Introducing me To new sound worlds Teaching me How to dance Or just watching And listening  To your amusing Conversations On all sorts of things So Open Carefree Not Judgmental No comparisons And always Each time Each session You'll never fail To pull out A genuine Smile Or Laugh From deep inside This Abyss One that cannot Be contained Or restrained Or just simply Watching the Plain Innocence With all your kiddish Knick-knacks Just for a little while It banishes All that Complexity And through All the gruelling camps All the scoldings All the punishments The yelling The pain The standing We still stuck through You guys  May not know How much it means To me To have such a platoon Keeping me going Through the tough times When I really want  To give up And give in But just seeing  The five of us Huddled together In the smallest Circle Making small laughs Small jokes The complaints The whining It somehow makes things Feel Right Pulling up that Swinging end Of the graph Into a positive Curve At the end Of the day
Thank you for being such awesome platoon mates :)
x-the-unknown-variable
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Aug 5, 2013
Aug 5, 2013 at 11:45 AM UTC
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