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I have no one to tell me that I did great. Only a mere nod, And that empty look that I hate. I understand that no one is responsible for me. Only look to God, That's how I carry on with this fate. I have no one to tell me that I did well, Only a quick smile, And pure disinterest, I can tell. I only have my achievements, Yes I only have me. But God tapped me on my shoulder Saying, "I'm really proud of Thee."
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May 4, 2021
May 4, 2021 at 9:50 PM UTC
I Have No One to Tell Me that I did Great
I have no one to tell me that I did great. Only a mere nod, And that empty look that I hate. I understand that no one is responsible for me. Only look to God, That's how I carry on with this fate. I have no one to tell me that I did well, Only a quick smile, And pure disinterest, I can tell. I only have my achievements, Yes I only have me. But God tapped me on my shoulder Saying, "I'm really proud of Thee."
You ever feel like no one is there? Like really there?
Madk
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May 4, 2021
May 4, 2021 at 9:50 PM UTC
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