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In a field of sand the poppies blow; Over pits touched by ocean flow; abaft a shade, hidden before some shut-eye sun; And after a leveled shore, Some petals show like crows on corpse. And the moon, Oh how it stares down at us: Like a half cut, half fallen birch tree. We cry to such birch foliage: That thirst these warm tears from us. Darling, do you see? How the sea is envy; it changes from blue to me; plodding over pounded rocks; palm to sole, fingers through toes; Swim back to a reflection of me-- There the poppies follow me.
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Feb 13, 2021
Feb 13, 2021 at 6:25 PM UTC
Where poppies follow me
In a field of sand the poppies blow; Over pits touched by ocean flow; abaft a shade, hidden before some shut-eye sun; And after a leveled shore, Some petals show like crows on corpse. And the moon, Oh how it stares down at us: Like a half cut, half fallen birch tree. We cry to such birch foliage: That thirst these warm tears from us. Darling, do you see? How the sea is envy; it changes from blue to me; plodding over pounded rocks; palm to sole, fingers through toes; Swim back to a reflection of me-- There the poppies follow me.
Inspired by a poem of John McCrae, 'In Flanders field'
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20/M/Philippines
Feb 13, 2021
Feb 13, 2021 at 6:25 PM UTC
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