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did You dream of the war when We were young?
 when the war was a far away nightmare days were peaceful and no song was unsung and doom was coming, with Us unaware You were doomed to fight and be a Hero and I, was a mere follower of You yet You love me like there's no tomorrow our love were something no one could undo the Fates said no Hero could be happy Gods and Goddesses were also unjust so You defied them, tried so hard to be as lovers and soldiers, We would attest home was somewhere in our warmth and our eyes alas war was cruel, it's gone as I died
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Oct 22, 2020
Oct 22, 2020 at 8:56 AM UTC
Lovers Die Young
did You dream of the war when We were young?
 when the war was a far away nightmare days were peaceful and no song was unsung and doom was coming, with Us unaware You were doomed to fight and be a Hero and I, was a mere follower of You yet You love me like there's no tomorrow our love were something no one could undo the Fates said no Hero could be happy Gods and Goddesses were also unjust so You defied them, tried so hard to be as lovers and soldiers, We would attest home was somewhere in our warmth and our eyes alas war was cruel, it's gone as I died
A sonnet about Achilles and Patroclus
Haebalagi
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Oct 22, 2020
Oct 22, 2020 at 8:56 AM UTC
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