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did You dream of the war when We were young?
 when the war was a far away nightmare days were peaceful and no song was unsung and doom was coming, with Us unaware You were doomed to fight and be a Hero and I, was a mere follower of You yet You love me like there's no tomorrow our love were something no one could undo the Fates said no Hero could be happy Gods and Goddesses were also unjust so You defied them, tried so hard to be as lovers and soldiers, We would attest home was somewhere in our warmth and our eyes alas war was cruel, it's gone as I died
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Oct 22, 2020
Oct 22, 2020 at 8:56 AM UTC
Lovers Die Young
Restless Ulysses calling seaward Wave-crest and trough on water Bark seal slap rush Carve one sweep, two sweep Push and the wayfarer Boot, back, and shoulder A life neatly bundled going on On and on and on; wander Because no god is present Without vastness, surrender Fire lick crackle burn driftwood blue On the sand in the gravel And restless sailor calling seaward Take the horizon to break Spine and sinew ironmonger The old and elderly will fondly remember These days when we were strong And the stars unobscured by smoke
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Jun 22, 2020
Jun 22, 2020 at 5:35 PM UTC
Camp
Shouting for longevity, Slamming at the counterers… - upon your dignified respite! Would-be detractors without brevity, Before the wine-dark Sea at night… A pleading to philosophy of commonly renowned, Beating sand and posturing, uncouth before a crown; “Priam please!” Sun and Moon, two sons shall plead, nay, -beg in tandem with the man; “He serves the seas, trust him please, our father; this priest of Trojan-land!” Laocoon “Fear the Greeks, of mind I speak, approval by a van-i-ty; it surely is a death you seek! An asp this horse, gift no more and tragedy in due remorse, I beg of you my call to heed, wooden-burnt this crispy steed, …alight in flame, glorified name; Poseidon shall endorse!” Priests of Apollo “Ridiculous! Worship we must, now bring it to the City thus!” Laocoon “The actions of accursed Kore, Need I remind you all Paris caused this war? For he mocked this god, the abyss it knows, with terror comes a deadly tide, **** that fool and his fiddling pride!* Burn this beast we must with haste for Greeks they have a certain taste, Their acts meant always to confound, wily, since they were unbound. What harm may do, to rest at shore? Consult the stars of yester-yore. Assign no chore, one heaven’s night, plus a day, to sit upon our princely shore?” Setting (read/spoken at the fastest pace the reader can go) A horrid hiss above the wave as two doth slither from out the cave…   The creatures from the darkest days, ancient spectacle for the knaves, bear witness to the punishment, commanded by a great trident, hearing screams of bannermen, for King and council a shocking twist, serpents ****** from out the mists, encircling priest and his kin, the howling they had done no sin, never be forgot-ten, as Typhon cried out merrily, serpents and the tragic sea; swallowed up all the three. Priam “Farewell dear Laocoon and two sons with thee!” *
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Jun 17, 2016
Jun 17, 2016 at 4:13 PM UTC
Knowledge of the Peoples
Shouting for longevity, Slamming at the counterers… - upon your dignified respite! Would-be detractors without brevity, Before the wine-dark Sea at night… A pleading to philosophy of commonly renowned, Beating sand and posturing, uncouth before a crown; “Priam please!” Sun and Moon, two sons shall plead, nay, -beg in tandem with the man; “He serves the seas, trust him please, our father; this priest of Trojan-land!” Laocoon “Fear the Greeks, of mind I speak, approval by a van-i-ty; it surely is a death you seek! An asp this horse, gift no more and tragedy in due remorse, I beg of you my call to heed, wooden-burnt this crispy steed, …alight in flame, glorified name; Poseidon shall endorse!” Priests of Apollo “Ridiculous! Worship we must, now bring it to the City thus!” Laocoon “The actions of accursed Kore, Need I remind you all Paris caused this war? For he mocked this god, the abyss it knows, with terror comes a deadly tide, **** that fool and his fiddling pride!* Burn this beast we must with haste for Greeks they have a certain taste, Their acts meant always to confound, wily, since they were unbound. What harm may do, to rest at shore? Consult the stars of yester-yore. Assign no chore, one heaven’s night, plus a day, to sit upon our princely shore?” Setting (read/spoken at the fastest pace the reader can go) A horrid hiss above the wave as two doth slither from out the cave…   The creatures from the darkest days, ancient spectacle for the knaves, bear witness to the punishment, commanded by a great trident, hearing screams of bannermen, for King and council a shocking twist, serpents ****** from out the mists, encircling priest and his kin, the howling they had done no sin, never be forgot-ten, as Typhon cried out merrily, serpents and the tragic sea; swallowed up all the three. Priam “Farewell dear Laocoon and two sons with thee!” *
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Someone once said, "Vietnam is the great, epic poem of our generation." The greatest epic poem ever written about war is Homer's Iliad. So I wondered, which character would I be? Agamemnon? Too pompous. Achilles? Too deadly. Odysseus? Too crafty. Paris? Too dishonest. Hector, of course. Destined to fight on in a lost cause; his death inevitable, already foretold; courage in the face of doom. Hector. I like that. It has a bold ring to it. Maybe I'll change my name.   ~mce
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Apr 11, 2015
Apr 11, 2015 at 9:59 AM UTC
Apologies To Homer