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Laying on a deathbed in heaven, They said there was only happiness here, forever. Now all I wish for is My heart to stop, My lungs to empty, To breathe my last breath. So I just lay on my deathbed, Looking at the perfect, sparkling, sky.
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Oct 5, 2020
Oct 5, 2020 at 6:12 PM UTC
Happy, Forever
Laying on a deathbed in heaven, They said there was only happiness here, forever. Now all I wish for is My heart to stop, My lungs to empty, To breathe my last breath. So I just lay on my deathbed, Looking at the perfect, sparkling, sky.
Just a dystopian view on heaven, eternal life may not be the dream. People want to move on not necessarily live forever, and happiness would fade over time if you have everything you want.
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21/F/missing lil peep
Oct 5, 2020
Oct 5, 2020 at 6:12 PM UTC
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