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the tide never ebbed it just came in and in and in the seventh wave crashed over and the eighth and the ninth and the tenth and the whole ocean followed flowing in behind flooding and flooding filling my bones crashing into my skin for an eternity sand and coral driftwood and depths the deepest blue and sunken wrecks teeming life the spoils of war oh such tragic loss washed up with the remains of the dead flooded filling my lungs with brine with fathoms of salt my skin my bones my flesh sinking to the bottom of the sea until i just. couldn't. hold. my. breath.
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Sep 7, 2020
Sep 7, 2020 at 4:58 PM UTC
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the tide never ebbed it just came in and in and in the seventh wave crashed over and the eighth and the ninth and the tenth and the whole ocean followed flowing in behind flooding and flooding filling my bones crashing into my skin for an eternity sand and coral driftwood and depths the deepest blue and sunken wrecks teeming life the spoils of war oh such tragic loss washed up with the remains of the dead flooded filling my lungs with brine with fathoms of salt my skin my bones my flesh sinking to the bottom of the sea until i just. couldn't. hold. my. breath.
Why did you have to drown me.. you knew i was frightened of the water you knew i could not swim writing about feeeelingssss... is exhausting ... writing under water makes the ink smudge i'm sorry i broke your heart i told you not to love me.. your love was an ocean and i didn't know how to swim (this is the real poem even though it doesn't rhyme, not all poems rhyme okay... some just don't)
Denver
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Sep 7, 2020
Sep 7, 2020 at 4:58 PM UTC
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