this essence has been boiled down to the nearest nothing
and deep down, it feels familiar—
a bird too grown to only now learn to fly,
its wingtips creased the wrong way,
nearly featherless, and weak.
nowhere to go but down
and even then,
impact doesn't promise
resolution.
a poem with too few metaphors,
too much “telling”— we get the point
but SHOW us—
as if listless anger and sadness
it's just a clear-cut visual,
crystalline in memory against all odds.
this essence had been boiled down to the nearest nothing
and deep down, it feels misunderstood.
Jul 31, 2020
Jul 31, 2020 at 10:45 PM UTC
this essence has been boiled down to the nearest nothing
and deep down, it feels familiar—
a bird too grown to only now learn to fly,
its wingtips creased the wrong way,
nearly featherless, and weak.
nowhere to go but down
and even then,
impact doesn't promise
resolution.
a poem with too few metaphors,
too much “telling”— we get the point
but SHOW us—
as if listless anger and sadness
it's just a clear-cut visual,
crystalline in memory against all odds.
this essence had been boiled down to the nearest nothing
and deep down, it feels misunderstood.
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