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The rain falls as The flowers bloom The sun shines as The night falls The earth moves as The space is still The heart beats as The flow stops The eyes close as The mind opens The mouth speaks as The silence remains
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Jun 18, 2013
Jun 18, 2013 at 2:14 PM UTC
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The rain falls as The flowers bloom The sun shines as The night falls The earth moves as The space is still The heart beats as The flow stops The eyes close as The mind opens The mouth speaks as The silence remains
I sent this poem to my friend of mine. He was a bit mind-blogged by it so I broke it down for him. Here is how I interpreted it for him: You need rain in order for flowers to grow. There is always a day and a night. The earth is always busy where as space can have some sort of stillness. You can be alive and not feel. You don't have to see through your eyes to have an open mind. And you can say so much by not saying anything at all.
kayla-lyn
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Jun 18, 2013
Jun 18, 2013 at 2:14 PM UTC
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